Dear Brian and everybody, Thanks for your comments :) Since we got the call for sponsors document from COSCUP yesterday, and we talked about keeping the same packages for both GAS and COSCUP sponsors, if it is okay for you I will modify the packages of ours according to COSCUP document. Please find attached COSCUP call for sponsors document for reference and let me know if there is any objection. Regards, Pockey On Tue, 2010-05-11 at 18:09 -0500, Brian Cameron wrote: > Pockey: > > > Thanks again for helping out to proof read. I have modified all the > > comments. > > > > Besides, for "About GNOME.Asia Summit", I added the following sentences > > as well. Please kindly help to proof read as well. > > > > The summit has been recognized as the top 3 Open Source conference in > > I think you mean to say "as one of the top" > > > China in 2008 by the Chinese government and the biggest Open Source > > conference in Vietnam in 2009 by the Vietnamese government. Please refer > > to gnome.asia/ for more details. > > Some other comments: > > > Targetting GNOME and Open Source users, marketers and developers; > > this is a unique opportunity for stakeholders to reach out to the > > broadest possible Asian and Taiwanese audiance. > > You misspell "Targeting" and "audience". > > > As an immediate outcome you will have preferential access to speaking > > opportunities, to a conference database of highly qualified > > volunteers and developers and the possibility to add panel > > discussions on specific topics (recruting, technology, OSS business, > > etc.) or anything that you would feel is valuable for both the > > audience and your business. > > You misspell "recruiting" > > > Visible presence in the banner at the main venue stage; > > I would say "on the banner" > > > The opportunity to have one (1) cornerstone stand or booth of the > > size of 6x9m > > I would say "of the size 6x9m". Note the other packages have similar > wording which should be corrected. > > Under "Custom Sponsorship": > > > Free gifts (e.g. USB sticks, bags, notebooks, etc. that can be used > > as freebies or lucky draw gifts to guests and participatnts.) > > You misspell "participants". > > > And definitely, once the draft is finalized, we can send it to the > > mobile list , thanks! > > Great! > > Brian
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