Re: Updated "Why choose GNOME" leaflet

[Joachim Noreiko <jnoreiko yahoo com>]

--- Andreas Nilsson <nisses mail home se> wrote:

> Joachim Noreiko wrote:
> > --- Thomas Wood <thos gnome org> wrote:
> >
> >   
> >> Andreas and I have been working on improving the
> >> "Why choose GNOME"
> >> leaflet for the upcoming LinuxWorld Expo in
> London,
> >> UK. So far, we have
> >> come up with the following draft:
> >>
> <http://ramnet.se/~nisse/diverse/temp/whygnome.pdf>.
> >>
> >> We're now looking for comments on the text to
> make
> >> it more fun and
> >> interesting. It's probably worth noting the
> >> prospective audience will
> >> probably be IT managers and small developers.
> >>     
> >
> > "for end-users, users, " ? (first para)
> >
> > I'd indent the paragraphs with smaller icons so
> the
> > left margin of all text lines up.
> >
> > That's the proofreading. Not sure about the fun
> part.
> You mean line up with the logo?
> - Andreas
> 

I mean move text so that the left hand edge of all
paragraphs falls on a single vertical line.
Not sure what to do with the icons that are beneath
the logo -- maybe move them in too, or bring them all
on a central line through the logo.



		
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