Re: Updated "Why choose GNOME" leaflet

[Andreas Nilsson <nisses mail home se>]

Joachim Noreiko wrote:
> --- Thomas Wood <thos gnome org> wrote:
>
>   
> > Andreas and I have been working on improving the
> > "Why choose GNOME"
> > leaflet for the upcoming LinuxWorld Expo in London,
> > UK. So far, we have
> > come up with the following draft:
> > <http://ramnet.se/~nisse/diverse/temp/whygnome.pdf>.
> >
> > We're now looking for comments on the text to make
> > it more fun and
> > interesting. It's probably worth noting the
> > prospective audience will
> > probably be IT managers and small developers.
> >     
>
> "for end-users, users, " ? (first para)
>
> I'd indent the paragraphs with smaller icons so the
> left margin of all text lines up.
>
> That's the proofreading. Not sure about the fun part.
You mean line up with the logo?
- Andreas