Re: 3.20 release notes proofreading

[Adelia Rahim <adeliarahim gmail com>]

Hi Allan,

I realised that after sending that, and saw that there were recent activities, however I was stills seeing 
the same thing. I literally just learned “git pull” a few minutes ago :)

That said, everything looks good! Just saw one that needs to be corrected; the word “organising” in the 
second paragraph of the main page.

Sorry for the confusion.

adelia

> On 12 Mar 2016, at 9:43 AM, Allan Day <aday gnome org> wrote:
>
> Hi Adelia,
>
> Thanks for this!
>
> Adelia Rahim <adeliarahim gmail com> wrote:
> > Other than to standardise/standardize spellings to UK/US English ...
>
> Please let me know if you see any British English spellings in there.
> I try to avoid them, but sometimes they slip in.
>
> > - Under Wayland, second sentence “Wayland is also enables…"
>
> I can't find that - maybe it's fixed already...
>
> > - In general to standardise usage of the word app and applications
>
> We've always used "application" in GNOME, so I tend to try and stick
> with that. I've converted the two "app"s that I could find. Yell if
> you see any others.
>
> > - Under Polari, first sentence of second paragraph, "… as have server
> > settings"
>
> The sentence reads OK to me. Am I missing something?
>
> > - Under Maps, point #3, “This has been expanded for 3.20, with the addition
> > of printing for directions can be printed”. And also whether it is "print
> > outs" or “printouts"
>
> I don't see either of these issues in the current draft. Maybe you
> need to update the repository...
>
> Thanks again,
>
> Allan