Hi Allan,
Other than to standardise/standardize spellings to UK/US English, here are a few things I picked up:
- Under Wayland, second sentence “Wayland is also enables…" - In general to standardise usage of the word app and applications - Under Polari, first sentence of second paragraph, "… as have server settings" - Under Maps, point #3, “This has been expanded for 3.20, with the addition of printing for directions can be printed”. And also whether it is "print outs" or “printouts"
adelia
Thanks for the reviews so far! There are some missing sections in the "Other Improvements" page (file name is more.page), but the text that is there is more or less finalised, so it would be helpful to have reviews for that page.
Feel free to comment on content, style and organisation as well as language! We can still make changes.
Allan
Hi,
I haven't find any mistakes while reviewing the index page and it'seems perfect and I guess it's good to go but I'd appericiate if you also consider one or more reviews.
Goodluck with the rest of the release notes.
Best, Irfan ------ Original message------ From: Allan Day Date: Fri, Mar 11, 2016 8:25 PM To: engagement-list; Subject:3.20 release notes proofreading Hi everyone,
We are really short on time for the release notes, and they need to be completed ASAP. As a result, I'm trying to finalise each page in sequence, so it can be proof read while the next pages are being written up.
The first page (called index.page) is ready for proof reading. If anyone can review it and give feedback, that would be great. As usual, the notes can be found here:
You'll need the gnome-3-20 branch:
Many thanks to Adelia for helping out with the release notes - we'd be further behind than we already are without her!
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