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On 03/22/2013 11:30 AM, Flavia Weisghizzi wrote:
> Il 22/03/2013 16:18, Andre Klapper ha scritto:
>> On Fri, 2013-03-22 at 15:56 +0100, Flavia Weisghizzi wrote:
>>> I'm sure we don't need to detail explain what GNOME is and what
>>> GNOME makes: GNOME is THE leader in free software DE/project, and I'm
>>> sure journalists know it.
>> I don't think so. :) Even if most journalists "kind of know", their
>> readers might not necessarily so it's helpful to provide some reusable
>> info.
>>
>> andre
>
> I'm agree on providing some info, I'm not agree in focus first
> paragraphs of the press release on it :)
> I believe that we need to provide all the info regarding project, but
> not at the top of the press release :)
>
> If you tale a look to the press release that generally are sent out
> like [1]
> or [2] you could easily find that all the "company" info are gathered
> at the bottom :)
>
> [1]
> https://www.apple.com/pr/library/2013/03/06Apple-Launches-iBookstore-in-Japan.html
>
> [2]
> http://www.microsoft.com/en-us/news/press/2012/oct12/10-25windows8gapr.aspx
>
> Flavia
>
>
>
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