Re: revised the press release

[Flavia Weisghizzi <flavia weisghizzi it>]

Il 22/03/2013 16:18, Andre Klapper ha scritto:
> On Fri, 2013-03-22 at 15:56 +0100, Flavia Weisghizzi wrote:
> > I'm sure we don't need to detail explain what GNOME is and what
> > GNOME makes: GNOME is THE leader in free software DE/project, and I'm
> > sure journalists know it.
> I don't think so. :) Even if most journalists "kind of know", their
> readers might not necessarily so it's helpful to provide some reusable
> info.
>
> andre

I'm agree on providing some info, I'm not agree in focus first 
paragraphs of the press release on it :)
I believe that we need to provide all the info regarding project, but 
not at the top of the press release :)

If you tale a look to the press release that generally are sent out like [1]
or [2] you could easily find that all the "company" info are gathered at 
the bottom :)

[1] 
https://www.apple.com/pr/library/2013/03/06Apple-Launches-iBookstore-in-Japan.html

[2] 
http://www.microsoft.com/en-us/news/press/2012/oct12/10-25windows8gapr.aspx

Flavia