To all responding with feedback, I like what you're saying. Go ahead and modify the text to what you think would be better! http://piratepad.net/j4B5vOQBep Don't worry about changing it, all of the revisions are automatically saved. On 03/22/2013 11:30 AM, Flavia Weisghizzi wrote:
Il 22/03/2013 16:18, Andre Klapper ha scritto:On Fri, 2013-03-22 at 15:56 +0100, Flavia Weisghizzi wrote:I'm sure we don't need to detail explain what GNOME is and what GNOME makes: GNOME is THE leader in free software DE/project, and I'm sure journalists know it.I don't think so. :) Even if most journalists "kind of know", their readers might not necessarily so it's helpful to provide some reusable info. andreI'm agree on providing some info, I'm not agree in focus first paragraphs of the press release on it :) I believe that we need to provide all the info regarding project, but not at the top of the press release :) If you tale a look to the press release that generally are sent out like [1] or [2] you could easily find that all the "company" info are gathered at the bottom :) [1] https://www.apple.com/pr/library/2013/03/06Apple-Launches-iBookstore-in-Japan.html [2] http://www.microsoft.com/en-us/news/press/2012/oct12/10-25windows8gapr.aspx Flavia
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