Re: [gnome-love] Enhancement of the gnome-search-tool

[Murray Cumming <murrayc murrayc com>]

On Mon, 2010-01-25 at 13:38 -0800, Christian Sasso wrote:
> On Sun, Jan 24, 2010 at 11:38 AM, Andre Klapper <ak-47 gmx net> wrote:
>         Am Mittwoch, den 13.01.2010, 13:36 -0800 schrieb Christian
>         Sasso:
>         
>         > From
>         >
>         <http://library.gnome.org/devel/platform-overview/stable/who-should-read.html.en>
>         > - "It will provide an overview how you can use" -> "It will
>         provide an
>         > overview OF how you can use"
>         
>         
>         I don't know. Are you a native english speaker? 
>
> My gut feeling is that "of" is really required in this context, but my
> guts are Italian.

It's incorrect at the moment without the "of". It's awkward even with
the "of".

You might change it to:
"It will provide an overview of the GNOME platform, showing how you can
use it to build useful software.

However, I think that paragraph is superfluous anyway. I'd remove it.

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