Re: [gnome-love] Enhancement of the gnome-search-tool

On Mon, 2010-01-25 at 13:38 -0800, Christian Sasso wrote:
On Sun, Jan 24, 2010 at 11:38 AM, Andre Klapper <ak-47 gmx net> wrote:
        Am Mittwoch, den 13.01.2010, 13:36 -0800 schrieb Christian
        > From
        > - "It will provide an overview how you can use" -> "It will
        provide an
        > overview OF how you can use"
        I don't know. Are you a native english speaker? 

My gut feeling is that "of" is really required in this context, but my
guts are Italian.

It's incorrect at the moment without the "of". It's awkward even with
the "of".

You might change it to:
"It will provide an overview of the GNOME platform, showing how you can
use it to build useful software.

However, I think that paragraph is superfluous anyway. I'd remove it.

murrayc murrayc com

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