Uh, hold on. Are these wording fixes
that are coming now, when the design in in place. Wasn't the
process that was set up supposed to deal with this on an earlier
stage?
For me, it's OK, since you'll do the adjustments yourself. I just
want to stress that the process exist for a reason.
- Andreas
On 09/25/2015 06:44 AM, Jeff Fortin Tam wrote:
Alright, here is my big list of nitpicks. If there are no
objections I could fix them tomorrow or this week-end.
Also, I'd like to retroactively correct the previous year
report's date to reduce confusion.
Page 1
- Correct my name for photo attribution
- Add/correct credits for coordinators, proofreading, design?
Page 3
- "whose names can be found on the next page" << "whose
names can be seen at the beginning of this document"
- depending on available space: restore paragraph breaks,
adjust paragraphs spacing [low priority]
- fix the bulleted list & indents/alignment [low
priority]
4
- "Here are some glimpses into what we have achieved in
2013-14." >> I suppose we do mean "2014-15" for
hackfests?
- "Builder, the IDE specific made for GNOME development,"
>> Not sure about "specific"; "specifically"?
10
- "Became clear to Board that" >> "Became clear
to the Board that"
- Should "Pam" be replaced by "Pamela" (full length)
everywhere?
11
- 2nd paragraph: "to the situation at hand as they could
in order to" >> add a comma after "could", or remove
"at hand"?
- 3rd paragraph: "Family" is capitalized, is that
intentional?
12
- 3rd paragraph: "Keynotes" is capitalized, is that normal?
- technically, it's "elementary OS" instead of "Elementary
OS", but it would look weird in the middle of a sentence where
all the other names are capitalized... thoughts?
13
- "All three keynotes were very given to packed rooms and
rousing applause." >> "very given"..?
- 5th paragraph: "gstreamer" -> "GStreamer", "gpg" ->
"GPG"
16
- 3rd paragraph, "more reliab predictably", I suppose
I should take out the "reliab"
17
- update the Collabora logo
- I believe SFLC was no longer listed on the foundation pages
in 2014
- Year should be 2014, not 2013
18-20
- Add styling for the headings
- Fix the missing special character for "Micha"
Bartoszkiewicz (again)
Hopefully that's all that's left? Besides figuring out if we
can afford bespoke cover artwork this year :)
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