Re: 3.14 Video Manuscript Revision



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phtoo -> photo

(nit) called Hitori -> named Hitori

- -- Christian


On 08/18/2014 03:36 AM, Bastian Hougaard wrote:
Hi Christian,

Wow, thanks a lot for the detailed feedback! I've merged most of
your changes with the manuscript on the wiki now.

On Sun, Aug 17, 2014 at 11:15 , Christian Hergert
<christian hergert me> wrote:
However, I generally follow the sentences should have 15 words or
less guideline. Possibly worth breaking those each into their own
sentence.

In most cases I expect commas in the manuscript to have a more
pronounced pause than they normally would in a conversation, hence
why I use them a lot. But I agree.

I'm okay with the Builder line I guess. I don't want to seem like
I'm hijacking 3.14 release notes for something that, while under
the GNOME umbrella, is a selfish effort of my own desires :-)

Well, I thought it would supplement well to our message of wanting
to focus on the developer experience in GNOME. Plus it was an
interesting way to promote your fundraiser. I would be interested
in knowing how the rest of engagement feels about this, though?


- GNOME 3.14 has gained Clipboard support on Wayland and we're
pushing to have good tablet, keyboard and touch support through
libinput. + GNOME 3.14 has gained Clipboard support on Wayland.
We're advancing libinput to improve the experience on keyboards,
tablets, and touch.

^ Not sure on this one, is someone from GNOME contributing to
libinput development?

hmm, I actually am not sure. But anyone knows of a different area
of Wayland we've made an effort within, this cycle, feel free to
suggest that as a replacement.


Another thought that came to my mind. Do we want to encourage
donation / becoming a friend of GNOME in the end of the video? Is
this something we do in the release notes? Or should we keep that
out?


-bastianilso

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