Re: 3.14 Video Manuscript Revision

[Bastian Hougaard <hougaard junior gmail com>]

Hi Christian,

Wow, thanks a lot for the detailed feedback! I've merged most of your changes with the manuscript on the wiki now.

On Sun, Aug 17, 2014 at 11:15 , Christian Hergert <christian hergert me> wrote:

However, I generally follow the sentences should have 15 words or less

guideline. Possibly worth breaking those each into their own sentence.

>> In most cases I expect commas in the manuscript to have a more pronounced pause than they normally would in a conversation, hence why I use them a lot. But I agree.

I'm okay with the Builder line I guess. I don't want to seem like I'm

hijacking 3.14 release notes for something that, while under the GNOME

umbrella, is a selfish effort of my own desires :-)

Well, I thought it would supplement well to our message of wanting to focus on the developer experience in GNOME. Plus it was an interesting way to promote your fundraiser. I would be interested in knowing how the rest of engagement feels about this, though?

- GNOME 3.14 has gained Clipboard support on Wayland and we're pushing

to have good tablet, keyboard and touch support through libinput.

+ GNOME 3.14 has gained Clipboard support on Wayland. We're advancing

libinput to improve the experience on keyboards, tablets, and touch.

^ Not sure on this one, is someone from GNOME contributing to libinput

development?

hmm, I actually am not sure. But anyone knows of a different area of Wayland we've made an effort within, this cycle, feel free to suggest that as a replacement.

Another thought that came to my mind. Do we want to encourage donation / becoming a friend of GNOME in the end of the video? Is this something we do in the release notes? Or should we keep that out?

-bastianilso