Re: GNOME Free Agent T-shirt Proposal

[Stormy Peters <stormy gnome org>]

On Wed, May 19, 2010 at 1:49 PM, Bryen M. Yunashko <suserocks bryen com> wrote:

On Wed, 2010-05-19 at 14:12 -0500, Brian Cameron wrote:
>
>                     GNOME powers SugarLabs and OLPC
>            A global effort providing children with tools to
>               learn, achieve, and transform their world.

I like this revision much better.   If we're still looking to shorten
it,  how about "Globally providing" instead of "A global effort
providing"?

or... if we want to shorten it even further...

Globally enabling (or empowering) children to learn, achieve and
transform their world.

Teaching children to transform their world.

or

Enabling children to transform their world.

or

Enabling children to improve their world.

Stormy