Re: [guadec-list] Sponsor Brochure Darft

[Ludovic Danigo <ldanigo yahoo fr>]

--- Davyd Madeley <davyd madeley id au> a écrit :
> 
> I've had a go with the language on the front page. I
> like the basic 
> content and
> order, but I've tried to fill it out with powerful
> adjectives (and perhaps a
> few buzzwords) in an attempt to make it more
> exciting. I've added and 
> removed a
> few details here and there in an attempt to create a
> nice flow.
> 
> Tell me what you think?

I really like. Just one caveat maybe although it's
arguable,
I would keep the "About Gnome" more time agnostic that
way
what we would want to rely update for next edition is
"The n th Edition" part.

Adopted ! I'll update it tonight ;-)


-- 
Ludovic Danigo


	

	
		
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