Re: string freeze break

["Ray Strode" <halfline gmail com>]

Hi,

> Looking over your changes,
>
> +        The GDM greeter program displays a panel docked at the bottom
> of the screen
> +        which provides additional functionality.  When a user is selected, the
> +        panel allows the user to select which session, language, and
> keyboard layout
> +        to use when logging in.  The panel also contains an area for
> login services
> +        to leave status icons.  Some example status icons include a
> battery icon
> +        for current battery usage, and an icon for enabling
> accessibility features.
> +        The greeter program also provides buttons which allow the
> user to shutdown or
>
> You probably want to mention that the selected keyboard layout is also
> used in the login session, which is important when trying to enter
> your password.
>
> + When enabled, it displays all users which
> +        are available on the local system (all users defined in the
> +        /etc/passwd file)
>
> Here you perpaps want to clarify "excluding local system accounts,
> such as 'ftp' ".
> Or maybe that is obvious ?
>
> +        GDM allows multiple users to be logged in at the same time.  After one
> +        user is logged in, additional, users can log in via the User Switcher
> +        on the GNOME Panel, or from the "Switch User" button in Lock
> Screen dialog
> +        of GNOME Screensaver.  The active session can be changed back
> and forth using
> +        the same mechanism.
>
> Might want to add here that the 'User Switcher' is an applet that is
> installed by gdm, and which can be added to the panel if it has not
> been put there already by the default panel configuration.
Thanks for the review.  I've added changes to address your recommendations.

--Ray
(Let's take release-team@ and gnome-i18n@ off for any further review,
so we aren't spamming people's Inbox's)