Re: Release notes typos?

[Evandro Fernandes Giovanini <evandrofg ig com br>]

Em Qua, 2005-08-24 Ãs 16:24 +0200, Murray Cumming escreveu:
> > 1.
> > #: /tmp/doc-l10n/cvs/release-notes.HEAD/C/rndesktop.xml:52(para)
> > msgid "The location is now show with the GNOME's path bar instead of
> > a text entry. The text path is still available via the Control-L
> > keyboard shortcut."
> >
> > "shown by Gnome's path-bar, instead of by a text entry."
> 
> This doesn't seem very worthwhile. The - isn't essential. and the extra
> "by" isn't necessary.
> 

I think the main problem is "(...)location is now _show_ with the...".

Evandro