Re: FDL Blurb #2

[Eric Baudais <drake x8b4e541f dhcp okstate edu>]

On Fri, 7 Apr 2000, Dan Mueth wrote:

> 
> Here is my current draft of the FDL legalnotice, after incorporating some
> of the suggestions made.  Note that I still have the trademark section at
> the bottom and this is likely to be removed. Let's get this finalized ASAP
> so we can start moving all our docs to the FDL.
> 
> Dan
> 
> ---
> 
>     <legalnotice>
>       <para>
>        Permission is granted to copy, distribute and/or modify this
>        document under the terms of the GNU Free Documentation License,
>        Version 1.1 or any later version published by the Free Software
>        Foundation with no Invariant Sections, no Front-Cover
>        Texts, and no Back-Cover Texts. You may obtain a copy 
>        of the GNU General Free Documentation License from the Free 
>        Software Foundation by visiting <ulink type="http" 
>        url="http://www.fsf.org">their Web site</ulink> or by writing
>        to the Free Software Foundation, Inc., 59 Temple Place - 
>        Suite 330, Boston, MA 02111-1307, USA.
>       </para>

I think you should have some more markup for the address like:
Free Software Foundation, Inc. <address><street>59 Temple Place</street> -
Suite 330, <city>Boston</city>, <state>MA</state>
<postcode>02111-1307</postcode>, <country>USA</country>.
 
>       <para> UNIX is a trademark of X/Open Group.</para> <para> Linux
>       is a trademark of Linus Torvalds.</para> <para> X Window System
>       is a trademark of X Consortium, Inc.</para> <para> Windows is a
>       trademark of Microsoft Corp.</para>
>     </legalnotice>
 
Otherwise it looks good.

Eric Baudais