Re: GNOME 3.24 Release Video: Manuscript Draft 2

[Karen Sandler <karen gnome org>]

On 2017-02-21 17:55, Bastian Ilso wrote:
> Hi again,
>
> Thanks for the feedback on draft 1. It gave me inspiration and
> motivation to iterate on it!
>
> Much of the rework is because I want to bring more _community_ into
> our video. It's easy to forget amidst all the fancy new features but I
> think it is an important thing to celebrate as part of GNOME 3.24. I
> also think will connect really well with our call for contribution
> that we have in the end of the video. You get a much better idea what
> kind of community you are joining. :-)
>
> I also have good ideas for the animations (sorry for all the brackets
> stuff). Anyway, you can find the new draft here:
>
> https://wiki.gnome.org/ThreePointTwentythree/ReleaseVideo [1]
>
> So, a bit different from normal release videos but this will be a nice
> experiment, let's see where it takes us.
>
> What do you think? Please leave feedback on the wiki page or reply 
> here.

I like it!!! I made some minor tweeks, which I would normally do while 
recording :)

karen