Re: GNOME 3.24 Release Video: Manuscript Draft 2

[Bastian Ilso <hougaard junior gmail com>]

I cleaned the feedback field, I should have addressed your points. If you disagree, feel free throw it back at me or ping me on IRC. :)

-Bastian

On Tue, Feb 21, 2017 at 11:55 , Bastian Ilso <hougaard junior gmail com> wrote:

Hi again,

Thanks for the feedback on draft 1. It gave me inspiration and motivation to iterate on it!

Much of the rework is because I want to bring more _community_ into our video. It's easy to forget amidst all the fancy new features but I think it is an important thing to celebrate as part of GNOME 3.24. I also think will connect really well with our call for contribution that we have in the end of the video. You get a much better idea what kind of community you are joining. :-)

I also have good ideas for the animations (sorry for all the brackets stuff). Anyway, you can find the new draft here:

https://wiki.gnome.org/ThreePointTwentythree/ReleaseVideo

So, a bit different from normal release videos but this will be a nice experiment, let's see where it takes us. 

What do you think? Please leave feedback on the wiki page or reply here.

-Bastian