Re: GNOME Free Agent T-shirt Proposal
- From: Brian Cameron <brian cameron oracle com>
- To: Paul Cutler <pcutler gnome org>
- Cc: Dave Neary <dneary gnome org>, marketing-list gnome org
- Subject: Re: GNOME Free Agent T-shirt Proposal
- Date: Thu, 27 May 2010 21:01:58 -0500
Okay, no more votes. However, the folks at Sugar Labs made a
small request that the text be changed a bit.
GNOME, Sugar Labs, and OLPC empower previously marginalized
children throughout the developing world to learn, achieve, and
transform their communities.
That seems reasonable to me. Does this sound good to people?
Brian
On 05/21/10 02:04 PM, Brian Cameron wrote:
Out of the discussion so far I like 3 choices:
#1) The original text
GNOME technologies power SugarLabs and OLPC to help previously
marginalized children throughout the developing world learn,
achieve and begin to transform their communities.
#2) Shorter version
GNOME powers SugarLabs and OLPC
Globally providing children with tools to
learn, achieve, and transform their world.
#3) Really short version
GNOME powers SugarLabs and OLPC
Enabling children to transform their world.
Let's vote. I pick #2. I know Dave & Paul picked #1.
Brian
On 05/19/10 09:27 PM, Paul Cutler wrote:
On Wed, 2010-05-19 at 22:12 +0200, Dave Neary wrote:
Hi,
Bryen M. Yunashko wrote:
I like this revision much better. If we're still looking to shorten
it, how about "Globally providing" instead of "A global effort
providing"?
I really liked the long flowing wordy version - a great message, great
conversation starter, and the text was part of the design. I would love
to wear the t-shirt with the initial design.
Cheers,
Dave.
--
Dave Neary
GNOME Foundation member
dneary gnome org
After (finally!) catching up on this thread just now (great to see all
the activity on the marketing list!) I agree with Dave.
Reading through some of the text / copy suggestions and putting my
documentation hat, I think to Brian's point of educating what GNOME is
powering / member of an ecosystem I'd leave it as it is in the first
design. I like how it flows as well on the shirt itself.
Paul
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