Re: GNOME Free Agent T-shirt Proposal



Hi Brian,

I haven't been in this loop, but that's OK.

Just a comment, we generally don't like being "powered" by anything...
not powered by Fedora, not powered by OpenSUSE or Ubuntu or Mandriva,
not powered by Geode, VIA, or ARM chips, not powered by OpenFirmware
;-)

But if it's finalized, no fuss.

In my experience shorter is better for a text message - it's hard to
be concise, but worth the effort.

How about this?

"GNOME technologies empower children!"

Also: "Sugar Labs" not "SugarLabs". I know the words are concatenated
in our logo, but in text we separate.

Thanks.

Sean
Sugar Labs Marketing Coordinator


On 5/26/10, Brian Cameron <brian cameron oracle com> wrote:

 No votes since last Friday.  I will wait until the 27th for more votes.
 If there are not any more votes, then choice #1 will win with 2 votes.

 Brian



 On 05/21/10 02:04 PM, Brian Cameron wrote:


Out of the discussion so far I like 3 choices:

#1) The original text

GNOME technologies power SugarLabs and OLPC to help previously
marginalized children throughout the developing world learn,
achieve and begin to transform their communities.

#2) Shorter version

GNOME powers SugarLabs and OLPC
Globally providing children with tools to
learn, achieve, and transform their world.

#3) Really short version

GNOME powers SugarLabs and OLPC
Enabling children to transform their world.

Let's vote. I pick #2. I know Dave & Paul picked #1.

Brian


On 05/19/10 09:27 PM, Paul Cutler wrote:

On Wed, 2010-05-19 at 22:12 +0200, Dave Neary wrote:

Hi,

Bryen M. Yunashko wrote:

I like this revision much better. If we're still looking to shorten
it, how about "Globally providing" instead of "A global effort
providing"?


I really liked the long flowing wordy version - a great message, great
conversation starter, and the text was part of the design. I would
love
to wear the t-shirt with the initial design.

Cheers,
Dave.

--
Dave Neary
GNOME Foundation member
dneary gnome org


After (finally!) catching up on this thread just now (great to see all
the activity on the marketing list!) I agree with Dave.

Reading through some of the text / copy suggestions and putting my
documentation hat, I think to Brian's point of educating what GNOME is
powering / member of an ecosystem I'd leave it as it is in the first
design. I like how it flows as well on the shirt itself.

Paul





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