Re: GNOME Free Agent T-shirt Proposal
- From: "Bryen M. Yunashko" <suserocks bryen com>
- To: marketing-list gnome org
- Subject: Re: GNOME Free Agent T-shirt Proposal
- Date: Wed, 19 May 2010 14:49:54 -0500
On Wed, 2010-05-19 at 14:12 -0500, Brian Cameron wrote:
GNOME powers SugarLabs and OLPC
A global effort providing children with tools to
learn, achieve, and transform their world.
I like this revision much better. If we're still looking to shorten
it, how about "Globally providing" instead of "A global effort
providing"?
or... if we want to shorten it even further...
Globally enabling (or empowering) children to learn, achieve and
transform their world.
Bryen
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