Re: Minor comments about the release notes draft

["Diego Escalante Urrelo" <diegoe gnome org>]

On 9/12/07, Sankarshan Mukhopadhyay <sankarshan mukhopadhyay gmail com> wrote:
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> Diego Escalante Urrelo wrote:
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> > "The GNOME Panel can be seen at the top and bottom of your screen in
> > most distributions. It has some small but helpful improvements in
> > GNOME 2.20. For instance, the Window List applet no longer resizes its
> > buttons whenever the length of window titles change. For instance,
> > this avoids annoying resizes when changing tabs in your web browser.
> > And the Window Selector applet now sorts its drop-down list by
> > workspace."
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> > Can we remove the second "For instance"? It has no use there in my opinion.
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> This action avoids annoying resizes when changing tabs .... (the second
> time it is redundant to use for instance again)

Oh I meant the redundancy not the sentence itself :).