Re: Minor comments about the release notes draft



On Tue, 2007-09-11 at 21:02 +0300, Lucas Rocha wrote:
  - "The Release Notes are available in several languages..."  This
paragraph follows the one ending "You can learn more about the changes
that happened in GNOME 2.18 from its release notes."  It's probably just
me, but it would be more clear to replace it with "This release notes
are available in several languages...".

I didn't get it. What exactly chould be changed?

"The Release Notes are available" -> "These release notes are available"

  - Evince section doesn't say whether you can save the filled-in PDF
files.

Any evince maintainer around to confirm?

  - May want to link Cairo to its website as it's an external module.
Also, technically, "Cairo" should be replaced by "cairo graphics
library", not capitalized.

Trademark policy?

Not sure whose trademark policy you mean.  This is the way Carl prefers
people write it.

Murray, what do you think?

--lucasr

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