Re: Minor comments about the release notes draft

["Lucas Rocha" <lucasr gnome org>]

Hi,

> Was checking out the release notes draft.  Minor comments:
>
>   - "Ubuntu Linux" is a phrase not used by the Ubuntu project.  It
> should either simply be "Ubuntu", or something like "Ubuntu GNU/Linux
> distribution".

I agree.

>   - Two of the images on the page are particularly large in file size.
> rnintroduction-screenshot.png is 400kb and rnusers-eog.png is 580kb.
> They are both very nice, but a bit largish for slower connections.
> Given that rnintroduction-screenshot.png is visible on the first page of
> the release notes, it may be worth replacing with something lighter.
> Given that it's a scaled-down image anyway, makes sense to use a jpg
> instead that takes 250kb from a quick test here.

+1.

>   - "The Release Notes are available in several languages..."  This
> paragraph follows the one ending "You can learn more about the changes
> that happened in GNOME 2.18 from its release notes."  It's probably just
> me, but it would be more clear to replace it with "This release notes
> are available in several languages...".

I didn't get it. What exactly chould be changed?

>   - Evince section doesn't say whether you can save the filled-in PDF
> files.

Any evince maintainer around to confirm?

>   - May want to link Cairo to its website as it's an external module.
> Also, technically, "Cairo" should be replaced by "cairo graphics
> library", not capitalized.

Trademark policy?

Murray, what do you think?

--lucasr