[release-notes/gnome-3-30: 15/21] Rewrite Boxes section

[Link Dupont <link src gnome org>]

commit 954aac78f389d4df3b448da300632c7863ced625
Author: Link Dupont <link sub-pop net>
Date:   Mon Aug 13 08:35:35 2018 -0700

    Rewrite Boxes section

 help/C/index.page | 2 +-
 1 file changed, 1 insertion(+), 1 deletion(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 4419c183..43137165 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -53,7 +53,7 @@
   <section id="boxes-rdp">
     <title>Box Up Your Windows</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p><app>Boxes</app>, the GNOME virtual machine application, can now connect to remote Windows servers 
using the Remote Desktop Protocol (RDP). Boxes also now has the ability to import OVA files, making sharing 
virtual machines even easier.</p>
+    <p><app>Boxes</app>, the GNOME virtual machine application, can now connect to remote Windows servers 
using the Remote Desktop Protocol (RDP). This makes managing Windows Servers as seamless as possible, letting 
you concentrate on the task at hand instead of worrying about connection protocols and remote access. Boxes 
also now has the ability to import OVA files, making sharing virtual machines even easier.</p>
   </section>
   
   <section id="games-improvements">