[release-notes/gnome-3-30: 16/21] Rewrite Games section

[Link Dupont <link src gnome org>]

commit 76b4e2dac2ae3eefd45d459888f4b7d41caafff4
Author: Link Dupont <link sub-pop net>
Date:   Mon Aug 13 08:39:15 2018 -0700

    Rewrite Games section

 help/C/index.page | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 43137165..aca1267a 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -59,11 +59,11 @@
   <section id="games-improvements">
     <title>Even More Games</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p><app>Games</app>, the retro gaming application, is even easier to use than before. The entire 
application can be navigated by gamepad. Additional improvements include:</p>
+    <p><app>Games</app>, the retro gaming application, is faster to use now that the entire application can 
be navigated by gamepad. Additional improvements include:</p>
     <list>
-      <item><p>The keyboard can be mapped to gamepad inputs.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Additional details about each available game is displayed in the collection view.</p></item>
-      <item><p>The Flatpak bundles 4 more emulator cores.</p></item>
+      <item><p>The keyboard can be mapped to gamepad inputs, for those times when you don't have your 
gamepad with you.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Finding games is faster now that additional details about each available game are displayed 
in the collection view.</p></item>
+      <item><p>The Flatpak bundles 4 more emulator cores, allowing you to play even more games than 
ever.</p></item>
     </list>
   </section>