[release-notes/gnome-3-30: 14/21] Rewrite Web Content Reader section



commit c906a2e6666f8276a580432804a38fd3c76167c0
Author: Link Dupont <link sub-pop net>
Date:   Mon Aug 13 08:31:50 2018 -0700

    Rewrite Web Content Reader section

 help/C/index.page | 4 ++--
 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index fa887b0d..4419c183 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -45,9 +45,9 @@
   </section>
 
   <section id="web-reader">
-    <title>Read Easier</title>
+    <title>Focus On The Content</title>
     <media type="image" src="figures/placeholder.png"/>
-    <p><app>Web</app>, the GNOME browser, now makes it easier to read content on the web. When viewing a 
compatible web page, <app>Web</app> can toggle between the normal view and the clean, minimal reader view.</p>
+    <p>The web has long been a resource for finding information and reading long-form documentation. 
<app>Web</app>, the GNOME browser, now helps you focus on the content more than ever with a new minimal 
reader view. When viewing a compatible web page, <app>Web</app> can toggle between the normal view and the 
clean, minimal reader view. The minimal view strips out all extraneous menus, images, and content not related 
to the article or document, making for a more pleasant reading experience.</p>
   </section>
   
   <section id="boxes-rdp">


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