[gnome-user-docs] Test net-mobile for 3.18

[David King <davidk src gnome org>]

commit b849b972886a32bdfaff81eaf9074a8bff63febb
Author: David King <amigadave amigadave com>
Date:   Mon Sep 28 23:26:52 2015 +0100

    Test net-mobile for 3.18

 gnome-help/C/net-mobile.page |   20 ++++++++++++--------
 1 files changed, 12 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-mobile.page b/gnome-help/C/net-mobile.page
index 7dd5893..21dcf31 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-mobile.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-mobile.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     <link type="guide"  xref="net-wireless"/>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.14" date="2014-11-10" status="review"/>
-    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -17,6 +17,10 @@
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>David King</name>
+      <email>amigadave amigadave com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <desc>Use your phone or Internet stick to connect to the mobile broadband
     network.</desc>
@@ -31,24 +35,25 @@
   <steps>
     <item><p>Connect your phone or Internet stick to a USB port on your
     computer.</p></item>
-
   <item>
     <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">system menu</gui> from the right
     side of the top bar.</p>
   </item>
   <item>
     <p>Select
-    <gui><media its:translate="no" type="image" mime="image/svg" 
src="figures/network-wireless-signal-excellent-symbolic.svg" width="16" height="16"/>
-      Wi-Fi Not Connected</gui>. The Wi-Fi section of the menu will expand.</p>
+    <gui><media its:translate="no" type="image" mime="image/svg" 
src="figures/network-cellular-signal-excellent-symbolic.svg" width="16" height="16"/>
+      Mobile Broadband Off</gui>. The <gui>Mobile Broadband</gui> section of
+      the menu will expand.</p>
       <note>
         <p>If <gui>Mobile Broadband</gui> does not appear in the system
         status menu, ensure that your device is not set to connect as Mass
         Storage.</p>
       </note>
     </item>
-    <item><p>If you are connecting for the first time, the Mobile Broadband
-    wizard is launched. The opening screen displays a list of required
-    information. Click <gui style="button">Next</gui>.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Select <gui>Connect</gui>. If you are connecting for the first
+    time, the <gui>Set up a Mobile Broadband Connection</gui> wizard is
+    launched. The opening screen displays a list of required information. Click
+    <gui style="button">Next</gui>.</p></item>
     <item><p>Choose your provider's country or region from the list. Click
     <gui style="button">Next</gui>.</p></item>
     <item><p>Choose your provider from the list. Click
@@ -60,7 +65,6 @@
     <gui style="button">Apply</gui>. The wizard will close and the
     <gui>Network</gui> panel will display the properties of your
     connection.</p></item>
-
   </steps>
 
 </page>