[gnome-user-docs] Review mouse-problem-notmiving, needs further work



commit fb216b32a1657f0313b09aa5abb359715449235b
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Mon Sep 28 18:15:11 2015 -0400

    Review mouse-problem-notmiving, needs further work

 gnome-help/C/mouse-problem-notmoving.page |   29 +++++++++++++++++------------
 1 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/mouse-problem-notmoving.page b/gnome-help/C/mouse-problem-notmoving.page
index 2df1d42..11c25ea 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/mouse-problem-notmoving.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/mouse-problem-notmoving.page
@@ -1,13 +1,13 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
-  type="topic"
-  style="problem"
-  id="mouse-problem-notmoving">
-<info>
-    <link type="guide" xref="mouse#problems"/>
+      type="topic" style="problem"
+      id="mouse-problem-notmoving">
 
-    <desc>How to check your mouse if it is not working.</desc>
+  <info>
+    <link type="guide" xref="mouse#problems"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8.0" version="0.3" date="2013-03-13" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8" date="2013-03-13" status="candidate"/>
+    <!-- TODO: reorganise page and tidy because it's one ugly wall of text -->
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
         <name>Phil Bull</name>
@@ -17,8 +17,11 @@
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
     </credit>
+
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
-</info>
+
+    <desc>How to checki why your mouse is not working.</desc>
+  </info>
 
 <title>Mouse pointer is not moving</title>
 
@@ -105,10 +108,12 @@
 <section id="wireless-mice">
  <title>Checking wireless mice</title>
 
- <list>
-   <item><p>Make sure the mouse is turned on. There is often a switch on the
-   bottom of the mouse to turn the mouse off completely, so you can move it
-   from place to place without it constantly waking up.</p></item>
+  <list>
+    <item>
+      <p>Make sure the mouse is turned on. There is often a switch on the
+      bottom of the mouse to turn the mouse off completely, so you can take it
+      with you without it constantly waking up.</p>
+    </item>
    <item><p>If you are using a Bluetooth mouse, make sure you have actually paired the
    mouse with your computer. See <link xref="bluetooth-connect-device"/>.</p></item>
   <item>


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