[gnome-user-docs] Update net-wireless-adhoc page



commit 9fd09da106a5e0e899dd31ef790ca80d723e7c45
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill gnome org>
Date:   Mon Sep 28 18:29:14 2015 -0400

    Update net-wireless-adhoc page

 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-adhoc.page |   32 +++++++++++++++++++++-----------
 1 files changed, 21 insertions(+), 11 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-adhoc.page b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-adhoc.page
index a50a912..6f8d5a6 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-adhoc.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-wireless-adhoc.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.10" date="2013-11-10" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.18" date="2015-09-28" status="final"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
@@ -30,10 +31,10 @@
 
 <title>Create a wireless hotspot</title>
 
-<p>You can use your computer as a wireless hotspot. This allows other devices to
-connect to you without a separate network, and allows you to share an internet
-connection you've made with another interface, such as to a wired network or
-over the cellular network.</p>
+  <p>You can use your computer as a wireless hotspot. This allows other devices
+  to connect to you without a separate network, and allows you to share an
+  internet connection you've made with another interface, such as to a wired
+  network or over the cellular network.</p>
 
 <comment>
 <cite date="2012-02-19">shaunm</cite>
@@ -46,14 +47,23 @@ link below where it says the name of the network is your device name.</p>
 </comment>
 
 <steps>
-  <item><p>Click the system status area on the top bar and select
-  <gui>Wi-Fi</gui>.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Select <gui>Wi-Fi Settings</gui>.</p></item>
+  <item>
+    <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">system menu</gui> from the right
+    side of the top bar.</p>
+  </item>
+  <item>
+    <p>Select
+    <gui><media its:translate="no" type="image" mime="image/svg" 
src="figures/network-wireless-signal-excellent-symbolic.svg" width="16" height="16"/>
+      Wi-Fi Not Connected</gui> or the name of the wireless network to which
+    you are already connected. The Wi-Fi section of the menu will expand.</p>
+  </item>
+  <item>
+    <p>Click <gui>Wi-Fi Settings</gui>.</p></item>
   <item><p>Click the <gui>Use as Hotspot...</gui> button.</p></item>
-  <item><p>If you are already connected to a wireless network, you will be asked
-  if you want to disconnect from that network. A single wireless adapter can
-  connect to or create only one network at a time. Click
-  <gui>Turn On</gui> to confirm.</p></item>
+  <item><p>If you are already connected to a wireless network, you will be
+  asked if you want to disconnect from that network. A single wireless adapter
+  can connect to or create only one network at a time. Click <gui>Turn On</gui>
+  to confirm.</p></item>
 </steps>
 
 <p>A network name (SSID) and security key are automatically generated.


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