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[gnome-user-docs] Review accounts pages for 3.14

commit fd654a28abd117d883754497a4e986b28290e339
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Sat Sep 20 16:34:43 2014 +0100

    Review accounts pages for 3.14

 gnome-help/C/accounts-add.page                    |   32 ++++++++++++++------
 gnome-help/C/accounts-create.page                 |    8 ++++-
 gnome-help/C/accounts-disable-service.page        |   21 +++++++++----
 gnome-help/C/accounts-provider-not-available.page |    4 +-
 gnome-help/C/accounts-remove.page                 |   18 ++++++++----
 gnome-help/C/accounts-which-application.page      |   11 ++++--
 gnome-help/C/accounts-whyadd.page                 |   21 +++++++++----
 7 files changed, 77 insertions(+), 38 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/accounts-add.page b/gnome-help/C/accounts-add.page
index 1908661..f7442bb 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/accounts-add.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/accounts-add.page
@@ -6,8 +6,9 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="accounts"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" version="0.1" date="2012-08-14" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" date="2012-08-14" status="draft"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.9.92" date="2012-09-18" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2013-09-20" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Jim Campbell</name>
@@ -17,8 +18,13 @@
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <years>2014</years>
+    </credit>
 
-    <desc>Connect an online account.</desc>
+    <desc>Connect to an online account.</desc>
 </info>
 
   <title>Add an account</title>
@@ -29,7 +35,14 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Click the <key>+</key> button in the lower-left portion of the
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Online Accounts</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Online Accounts</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click the <key>+</key> button in the lower-left corner of the
       window.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
@@ -38,9 +51,9 @@
       later time.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>A small website window will open where you can enter your online
-      account credentials. For example, if you are setting up a Google account,
-      enter your Google username and password.</p>
+      <p>A small website window or dialog will open where you can enter your
+      online account credentials. For example, if you are setting up a Google
+      account, enter your Google username and password.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>If you have entered your credentials correctly, you will be prompted
@@ -48,10 +61,9 @@
       continue.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select the applications that you want linked to your online account.
-      For example, if you want to use an online account for chat, but do not
-      want to use an online account for your calendar, turn the
-      <gui>Calendar</gui> option to <gui>OFF</gui>.</p>
+      <p>All services that are offered by an account provider will be enabled
+      by default. <link xref="accounts-disable-service">Switch</link>
+      individual services to <gui>OFF</gui> to disable them.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/accounts-create.page b/gnome-help/C/accounts-create.page
index 7b218df..d44cc86 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/accounts-create.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/accounts-create.page
@@ -8,6 +8,7 @@
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" date="2012-08-14" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.9.92" date="2013-09-18" status="candidate"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-20" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author editor">
       <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
@@ -34,8 +35,11 @@
   <!-- Tested with Google -->
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Open the <app>Online Accounts</app> settings from the
-      <gui>Activities</gui> overview.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Online Accounts</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Online Accounts</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Click <gui style="button">+</gui>.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/accounts-disable-service.page b/gnome-help/C/accounts-disable-service.page
index 29012a2..3ca66c4 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/accounts-disable-service.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/accounts-disable-service.page
@@ -6,14 +6,17 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="accounts"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" version="0.1" date="2012-08-14" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" date="2012-08-14" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2013-09-20" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
       <email its:translate="no">philbull gmail com</email>
     </credit>
     
-    <desc>Some online accounts can be used to access multiple services (like calendar and email). You can 
control which of these services can be used by applications.</desc>
+    <desc>Some online accounts can be used to access multiple services (like
+    calendar and email). You can control which of these services can be used by
+    applications.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>Control which online services an account can be used to access</title>
@@ -30,23 +33,27 @@
 
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Open the <app>Online Accounts</app> settings from the
-      <gui>Activities</gui> overview.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Online Accounts</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Select the account you want to change from the list on the left.</p>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Online Accounts</gui> to open the panel.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Select the account which you want to change from the list on the
+      left.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>A list of services that are available with this account will be
       shown under <gui>Use for</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Switch off any of the services that you don't want to be used.</p>
+      <p>Switch off any of the services that you do not want to use.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
   <p>Once a service has been disabled for an account, applications on your
-  computer won't be able to use the account to connect to that service any
+  computer will not be able to use the account to connect to that service any
   more.</p>
 
   <p>To turn on a service that you disabled, just go back to the <gui>Online
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/accounts-provider-not-available.page 
b/gnome-help/C/accounts-provider-not-available.page
index 50b714a..5158784 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/accounts-provider-not-available.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/accounts-provider-not-available.page
@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="accounts"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" version="0.1" date="2012-08-14" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" date="2012-08-14" status="review"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.9.92" date="2013-09-18" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@
   it. Only the account types that are listed are currently supported.</p>
 
   <note style="advanced">
-    <p>If you're interested in adding support for other services, contact the
+    <p>If you are interested in adding support for other services, contact the
     developers on the
     <link href="https://bugzilla.gnome.org/enter_bug.cgi?product=gnome-online-accounts";>
     bug tracker</link>.</p>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/accounts-remove.page b/gnome-help/C/accounts-remove.page
index 6621632..f7bee80 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/accounts-remove.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/accounts-remove.page
@@ -7,8 +7,9 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="accounts"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="accounts-disable-service"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" version="0.1" date="2012-08-15" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" date="2012-08-15" status="draft"/>
     <revision pkgversion="3.9.92" date="2013-09-18" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-20" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
@@ -24,16 +25,21 @@
 
 <title>Remove an account</title>
 
+  <p>You can remove an online account which you no longer wish to use.</p>
+
   <steps>
     <item>
-      <p>Open the <app>Online Accounts</app> settings from the
-      <gui>Activities</gui> overview.</p>
+      <p>Open the <gui xref="shell-terminology">Activities</gui> overview and
+      start typing <gui>Online Accounts</gui>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Click on <gui>Online Accounts</gui> to open the panel.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Select the account which you wish to remove.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Click the <key>-</key> button in the lower-left portion of the
+      <p>Click the <key>-</key> button in the lower-left corner of the
       window.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
@@ -42,11 +48,11 @@
   </steps>
 
   <note style="tip">
-    <p>Instead of deleting the account completely, it's possible to
+    <p>Instead of deleting the account completely, it is possible to
     <link xref="accounts-disable-service">restrict the services</link> accessed
     by your desktop.</p>
   </note>
 
-  <p>To remove GNOME's access to the online account, you should revoke the
+  <p>To prevent GNOME from accessing the online account, you should revoke the
   access through the account's website or similar service.</p>
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/accounts-which-application.page b/gnome-help/C/accounts-which-application.page
index cfdda1f..7028b9d 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/accounts-which-application.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/accounts-which-application.page
@@ -7,7 +7,8 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="accounts"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="accounts-disable-service"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8.2" version="0.2" date="2013-05-22" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8.2" date="2013-05-22" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-20" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Baptiste Mille-Mathias</name>
@@ -23,7 +24,9 @@
       <email its:translate="no">ak-47 gmx net</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>Applications can use the accounts created in <app>Online Accounts</app> and the services they 
exploit.</desc>
+    <desc>Applications can use the accounts created in <app>Online
+    Accounts</app> and the services they exploit.</desc>
+
   </info>
 
 <title>Which applications take advantage of online accounts?</title>
@@ -65,10 +68,10 @@
 </section>
 
 <section id="account-windows-skydrive">
-  <title>With a SkyDrive account</title>
+  <title>With a OneDrive account</title>
 
   <p><app>Documents</app> can access your online documents in Microsoft
-  SkyDrive and display them.</p>
+  OneDrive and display them.</p>
 </section>
 
 <section id="account-exchange">
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/accounts-whyadd.page b/gnome-help/C/accounts-whyadd.page
index 8eb42a5..c990be8 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/accounts-whyadd.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/accounts-whyadd.page
@@ -6,7 +6,8 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="accounts"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" version="0.1" date="2012-08-14" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" date="2012-08-14" status="review"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-02-20" status="candidate"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Susanna Huhtanen</name>
@@ -17,17 +18,23 @@
       <name>Michael Hill</name>
       <email its:translate="no">mdhillca gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Ekaterina Gerasimova</name>
+      <email its:translate="no">kittykat3756 gmail com</email>
+      <years>2014</years>
+    </credit>
 
     <desc>Why add your email or social media accounts to your desktop?</desc>
   </info>
 
 <title>Why should I add an account?</title>
 
-  <p>Adding your accounts brings your choice of services like calendar, chat
-  and e-mail straight to your desktop and makes the information of the services
-  a seamless part of your user experience. By adding accounts you can easily
-  keep in touch with services of different accounts, like chats, at the same
-  time. Just set your account once and every time you start your computer all
-  the accounts and services you've added are ready for you.</p>
+  <p>Adding your online accounts brings your choice of services like calendar,
+  chat and e-mail straight to your desktop and makes the information of the
+  services a seamless part of your user experience. By adding accounts you can
+  easily keep in touch using services from different accounts, like chats, at
+  the same time. Just set up your online accounts once and every time you start
+  your computer all the accounts and services that you have added are ready to
+  use.</p>
 
 </page>
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