[gnome-user-docs] Review sound-volume for 3.14

[David King <davidk src gnome org>]

commit c1bc42fc663c68ed9840a37218a10d1a92c3784d
Author: David King <amigadave amigadave com>
Date:   Sat Sep 20 15:35:49 2014 +0100

    Review sound-volume for 3.14
    
    https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=730557

 gnome-help/C/sound-volume.page |   41 +++++++++++++++++++++++----------------
 1 files changed, 24 insertions(+), 17 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-volume.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-volume.page
index d10b51f..4ef5528 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-volume.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-volume.page
@@ -1,9 +1,13 @@
 <page xmlns="http://projectmallard.org/1.0/";
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="sound-volume">
+
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="media#sound"/>
 
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.13.92" date="2014-09-20" status="review"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
       <email>philbull gmail com</email>
@@ -14,19 +18,18 @@
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
     </credit>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
     <desc>Set the sound volume for the computer and control the
     loudness of each application.</desc>
-    <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
 
 <title>Change the sound volume</title>
 
-  <p>To change the sound volume, click the sound icon in the status menu on the
-  top bar (it looks like a speaker) and move the volume slider left or right.
-  You can completely turn off sound by dragging the slider all the way to the
-  left.</p>
+  <p>To change the sound volume, open toe <gui xref="shell-terminology">system
+  menu</gui> from the right side of the top bar and move the volume slider left
+  or right. You can completely turn off sound by dragging the slider all the
+  way to the left.</p>
 
   <p>Some keyboards have keys that let you control the volume. They normally look
  like stylized speakers with waves coming out of them. They are often near the
@@ -39,17 +42,21 @@
 
 <section id="apps">
  <title>Changing the sound volume for individual applications</title>
- <p>You can change the volume for one application, but leave the volume for
- others unchanged. This is useful if you're listening to music and browsing the
- web, for example. You might want to turn off the volume in the web browser so
- sounds from websites don't interrupt the music.</p>
- <p>Some applications have volume controls in their main windows. If your
- application has one of these, use that to change the volume. Otherwise, click
- the sound icon on the top bar and select <gui>Sound Settings</gui>. Go to the
- <gui>Applications</gui> tab and change the volume of the application there.</p>
- <p>Only applications that are playing sounds will be listed. If an application
- is playing sounds but isn't listed, it might not support the feature that lets
- you control its volume in this way. In that case, you can't change its volume.</p>
+
+  <p>You can change the volume for one application, but leave the volume for
+  others unchanged. This is useful if you are listening to music and browsing
+  the web, for example. You might want to turn off the audio in the web browser
+  so sounds from websites do not interrupt the music.</p>
+  <p>Some applications have volume controls in their main windows. If your
+  application has one of these, use that to change the volume. Otherwise, open
+  <app>Settings</app> from the <gui>Activites</gui> overview and click
+  <gui>Sound</gui>. Go to the <gui>Applications</gui> tab and change the volume
+  of the application there.</p>
+  <p>Only applications that are playing sounds will be listed. If an
+  application is playing sounds but is not listed, it might not support the
+  feature that lets you control its volume in this way. In that case, you
+  cannot change its volume.</p>
+
 </section>
 
 </page>