[release-notes/gnome-3-8] fix some issues based on review by Michael Hill



commit 287322d84f1137ff4fd51b88eb04ef4e58a0d017
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Mon Mar 18 09:41:39 2013 +0000

    fix some issues based on review by Michael Hill

 help/C/developers.page   |    6 +++---
 help/C/more-core-ux.page |    2 +-
 help/C/shortcuts.page    |    2 +-
 3 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 5 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/developers.page b/help/C/developers.page
index 08650f6..4f4d9f5 100644
--- a/help/C/developers.page
+++ b/help/C/developers.page
@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@
   <section id="glib">
     <title>GLib</title>
     <list>
-      <item><p>g_type_init no longer needed and has been deprecated.</p></item>
+      <item><p><code>g_type_init</code> is no longer needed and has been deprecated.</p></item>
       <item><p><code>GTask</code> has been replaced with <code>GAsyncResult</code>.</p></item>
       <item><p>From 3.8 type modules are never unloaded.</p></item>
       <item><p>Interfaces cannot be added after <code>class_init</code> any more.</p></item>
@@ -71,7 +71,7 @@
     <title>Tracker</title>
     <list>
       <item><p>Full Text Search (FTS) v4 support has been added, including search result snippets (i.e. 
context around matching queries can be returned) and offsets (index in context matching queries).</p></item>
-      <item><p>Command line interfaces can now use text colors.Colour based command line 
interfaces.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Command line interfaces can now use text colors.</p></item>
       <item><p>Indexing support has been added for XPS (an XML Page Specific Microsoft alternative to PDF 
files) and DVI documents (DeVice Independent files - printable output of TeX files).</p></item>
     </list>
   </section>
@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@
     <title>Python Bindings (PyGObject)</title>
     <list>
       <item><p><app>PyGObject</app> now provides access to the full and original GLib API. The PyGObject 2.x 
method to call functions like <code>GLib.io_add_watch()</code> is now deprecated, causing a 
<code>PyDeprecationWarning</code>, and will be removed in a future release cycle.</p></item>
-      <item><p>Support for several data types has been added: <code>GParamSpec</code>, boxed list 
properties, or direct setting of string struct members.</p></item>
+      <item><p>Support for several data types has been added: <code>GParamSpec</code>, boxed list properties 
and direct setting of string struct members.</p></item>
       <item><p>The new <code>pygtkcompat.generictree</code> module offers a <app>PyGTK</app> compatible 
<code>TreeModel</code> class for easier porting</p></item>
       <item><p>With GNOME 3.8, <app>PyGObject</app> will raise a deprecation warning for introspected 
methods which are marked as deprecated. Run <code>python</code> with the <code>-Wd</code> option to see 
them</p></item>
     </list>
diff --git a/help/C/more-core-ux.page b/help/C/more-core-ux.page
index 078d7bd..d96edeb 100644
--- a/help/C/more-core-ux.page
+++ b/help/C/more-core-ux.page
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@
 
   <section id="notifications-messaging">
     <title>Notifications &amp; Messaging</title>
-    <p>In previous releases, the <gui>Message Tray</gui> could be displayed by resting the pointer against 
the bottom screen edge. For GNOME 3.8 this action have been updated to react to the force with which the 
pointer is pressed against the screen edge. Only a determined push will cause the <gui>Message Tray</gui> to 
open. This enhancement avoids accidental triggers and is quicker and more immediate.</p>
+    <p>In previous releases, the <gui>Message Tray</gui> could be displayed by resting the pointer against 
the bottom screen edge. For GNOME 3.8 this action has been updated to react to the force with which the 
pointer is pressed against the screen edge. Only a determined push will cause the <gui>Message Tray</gui> to 
open. This enhancement avoids accidental triggers and is quicker and more immediate.</p>
     <p>From GNOME 3.8, the <gui>Message Tray</gui> can also be opened and closed using the 
<keyseq><key>Super</key><key>M</key></keyseq> keyboard shortcut. This is really handy for quickly checking 
your outstanding messages and ongoing conversations.</p>
     <p>The <keyseq><key>Super</key><key>N</key></keyseq> keyboard shortcut has been added, which expands and 
focuses a notification. You can use this to reply to chat notifications with just the keyboard.</p>
     <media type="image" src="figures/chat-bubble.png"/>
diff --git a/help/C/shortcuts.page b/help/C/shortcuts.page
index fffae1d..1e7d47f 100644
--- a/help/C/shortcuts.page
+++ b/help/C/shortcuts.page
@@ -17,7 +17,7 @@
 
   <title>New keyboard shortcuts in GNOME 3.8</title>
 
-  <p>New keyboard shortcuts have been introduced for GNOME 3.8. These consistently use the Super (sometimes 
known as the windows key) for system commands. The previous versions of these shortcuts remain available.</p>
+  <p>New keyboard shortcuts have been introduced for GNOME 3.8. These consistently use the Super key 
(sometimes known as the windows key) for system commands. The previous versions of these shortcuts remain 
available.</p>
 
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