[gnome-terminal/mallard-help] help: final review of app-colors.page

[Ekaterina Gerasimova <egerasimov src gnome org>]

commit 107e3a3e3fc98e73066e031a2161ca952f4d9054
Author: Ekaterina Gerasimova <kittykat3756 gmail com>
Date:   Sat Mar 2 18:01:59 2013 +0000

    help: final review of app-colors.page

 help/C/app-colors.page |   71 +++++++++++++++++++++--------------------------
 1 files changed, 32 insertions(+), 39 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/app-colors.page b/help/C/app-colors.page
index daa9ba5..a339334 100644
--- a/help/C/app-colors.page
+++ b/help/C/app-colors.page
@@ -2,7 +2,7 @@
       type="task"
       id="app-colors">
   <info>
-    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-02-25" status="draft"/>
+    <revision version="0.1" date="2013-03-02" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author copyright">
       <name>Sindhu S</name>
@@ -23,15 +23,15 @@
 
   <title>Color schemes</title>
 
-  <p>For readability and asthetic purposes, you may want to change the colors
-  that <app>Terminal</app> uses for the text and background. You have the
-  following options:</p>
+  <p>If you do not like the default <app>Terminal</app> theme, you may want to
+  change the colors that are used for the text and background. You can select
+  to either chose the colors from your theme, select one of the presets or use
+  custom colour.</p>
 
-  <section id="from-system-theme">
-    <title>Use colors fromi your system theme</title>
+  <section id="system-theme">
+    <title>Use colors from your system theme</title>
 
-    <p>To use colors from the system theme for <app>Terminal</app>, such as the
-    background color:</p>
+    <p>To use colors from the system theme:</p>
 
     <steps>
       <item>
@@ -41,19 +41,19 @@
       </item>
       <item>
         <p>Check <gui style="checkbox">Use colors from system theme</gui>. The
-        changed will be applied automatically.</p>
+        changes will be applied automatically.</p>
       </item>
     </steps>
 
   </section>
 
-  <section id="built-in-schemes">
+  <section id="built-in-scheme">
     <title>Built-in schemes</title>
 
-    <p><app>Terminal</app> has built-in color schemes for you to choose from.
-    You can choose from <gui>Black on light yellow</gui>, <gui>Black on
-    white</gui>, <gui>Gray on black</gui>, <gui>Green on black</gui>,
-    <gui>White on black</gui>. To set any of the built-in schemes:</p>
+    <p>You can choose one of the built-in color schemes: <gui>Black on light
+    yellow</gui>, <gui>Black on white</gui>, <gui>Gray on black</gui>,
+    <gui>Green on black</gui>, <gui>White on black</gui>. To set any of the
+    built-in schemes:</p>
 
     <steps>
       <item>
@@ -62,26 +62,24 @@
         <gui style="tab">Colors</gui></guiseq>.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
-        <p>Choose the desired color scheme from <gui>Built-in schemes</gui> or
-        select <link xref="#custom-color-scheme"><gui>Custom</gui></link>.
-        Color scheme choices are applied immediately. Click
-        <gui style="button">Close</gui> to quit the dialog and return to
-        <app>Terminal</app>.</p>
+        <p>Make sure that <gui style="checkbox">Use colors from system
+        theme</gui> is unchecked. Choose the desired color scheme from
+        <gui>Built-in schemes</gui>. Color scheme choices are applied
+        automatically.</p>
         <note>
-          <p>Sometimes, the color of bold text will be selected form the
-          palette instead of the color that is set as the
-          <gui>Bold color</gui>.</p>
-       </note>
+          <p>Applications can chose to use a color from the palette rather than
+          the set specified bold color.</p>
+        </note>
       </item>
     </steps>
 
   </section>
 
-  <section id="custom-color-scheme">
+  <section id="custom-scheme">
     <title>Custom color scheme</title>
 
-    <p>You can set custom color schemes by changing the colors for text,
-    background and foreground from a color picker.</p>
+    <p>You can use custom colors for the text and the background in
+    <app>Terminal</app>:</p>
 
     <steps>
       <item>
@@ -90,28 +88,23 @@
         <gui style="tab">Colors</gui></guiseq>.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
-        <p>Select <gui>Custom</gui> from <gui style="group">Built-in
-        schemes</gui>.</p>
+        <p>Make sure that <gui style="checkbox">Use colors from system
+        theme</gui> is unchecked. Select <gui>Custom</gui> from the
+        <gui>Built-in schemes</gui> drop down list.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
-        <p>Click on the color sample next to the component which you would like
-        to change.</p>
+        <p>Click on the color sample next to the component which you would
+        like to change.</p>
       </item>
       <item>
-        <!-- Note to self: check UI -->
         <p>Choose your desired color from the color sample blocks and click
         <gui style="button">Select</gui>.</p>
-      </item>
-      <item>
-        <p>If you wish to select a color from the color picker, click on
+        <p>If you wish to select a custom color, click on
         <gui style="button">+</gui>. You can either input the desired color by
         typing in the hexadecimal color code or drag the slider to the left to
         adjust the colors and click on the desired color in the color
-        picker.</p>
-      </item>
-      <item>
-        <p>Click <gui style="button">Close</gui> to quit the dialog and return
-        to <app>Terminal</app>.</p>
+        chart.</p>
+        <p>Your changes will be applied automatically.</p>
       </item>
     </steps>