[four-in-a-row] Reviewed choose-opponent help page



commit 4154d379199666217362f6dc3edb3e152faccc71
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Mon Apr 15 05:33:13 2013 -0400

    Reviewed choose-opponent help page

 help/C/choose-opponent.page |   24 ++++++++++++++----------
 1 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/choose-opponent.page b/help/C/choose-opponent.page
index 6326610..d20d4bc 100644
--- a/help/C/choose-opponent.page
+++ b/help/C/choose-opponent.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#preferences"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="final"/>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -13,28 +13,32 @@
       <name>Aruna Sankaranarayanan</name>
       <email>safincrazy gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
     <desc>Change the level at which the computer plays or play with a
     friend.</desc>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Choose a different opponent to play with</title>
+  <title>Choose a different opponent </title>
   <p>By default, your opponent in <app>Four-in-a-row</app> is the computer,
-  playing at level 1. To change this level or to play with a friend:</p>
+  playing at level one.</p>
 
   <steps>
+    <title>To change the level, or to play with a friend:</title>
     <item>
       <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Settings</gui>
       <gui style="menuitem">Preferences</gui>
-      <gui style="menuitem">Game</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+      <gui style="menuitem">Game</gui></guiseq>. You will see
+      <gui>Player One</gui> and <gui>Player Two</gui>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>You will see <gui>Player One</gui> and <gui>Player Two</gui>. Under
-      each player, you can see the color of his marbles or blocks during the
-      game. Choose <gui style="radiobutton">Human</gui> if want to play with a
-      friend or family member. Alternatively, if you want to play against the
-      computer and want to change the level at which the computer plays, you
-      can choose between <gui style="radiobutton">Level one</gui>,
+      <p>Choose <gui style="radiobutton">Human</gui> for both players if want to
+      play with a friend or family member.</p>
+      <p>Alternatively, choose the level at which the computer plays. Choose
+      between <gui style="radiobutton">Level one</gui>,
       <gui style="radiobutton">Level two</gui> or
       <gui style="radiobutton">Level three</gui>, where
       <gui style="radiobutton">Level one</gui> is the


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