[four-in-a-row] Reviewed choose-opponent help page
- From: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [four-in-a-row] Reviewed choose-opponent help page
- Date: Tue, 30 Apr 2013 15:31:23 +0000 (UTC)
commit 4154d379199666217362f6dc3edb3e152faccc71
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date: Mon Apr 15 05:33:13 2013 -0400
Reviewed choose-opponent help page
help/C/choose-opponent.page | 24 ++++++++++++++----------
1 files changed, 14 insertions(+), 10 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/choose-opponent.page b/help/C/choose-opponent.page
index 6326610..d20d4bc 100644
--- a/help/C/choose-opponent.page
+++ b/help/C/choose-opponent.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#preferences"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="draft"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="final"/>
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
@@ -13,28 +13,32 @@
<name>Aruna Sankaranarayanan</name>
<email>safincrazy gmail com</email>
</credit>
+ <credit type="editor">
+ <name>Michael Hill</name>
+ <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+ </credit>
<desc>Change the level at which the computer plays or play with a
friend.</desc>
</info>
- <title>Choose a different opponent to play with</title>
+ <title>Choose a different opponent </title>
<p>By default, your opponent in <app>Four-in-a-row</app> is the computer,
- playing at level 1. To change this level or to play with a friend:</p>
+ playing at level one.</p>
<steps>
+ <title>To change the level, or to play with a friend:</title>
<item>
<p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Settings</gui>
<gui style="menuitem">Preferences</gui>
- <gui style="menuitem">Game</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+ <gui style="menuitem">Game</gui></guiseq>. You will see
+ <gui>Player One</gui> and <gui>Player Two</gui>.</p>
</item>
<item>
- <p>You will see <gui>Player One</gui> and <gui>Player Two</gui>. Under
- each player, you can see the color of his marbles or blocks during the
- game. Choose <gui style="radiobutton">Human</gui> if want to play with a
- friend or family member. Alternatively, if you want to play against the
- computer and want to change the level at which the computer plays, you
- can choose between <gui style="radiobutton">Level one</gui>,
+ <p>Choose <gui style="radiobutton">Human</gui> for both players if want to
+ play with a friend or family member.</p>
+ <p>Alternatively, choose the level at which the computer plays. Choose
+ between <gui style="radiobutton">Level one</gui>,
<gui style="radiobutton">Level two</gui> or
<gui style="radiobutton">Level three</gui>, where
<gui style="radiobutton">Level one</gui> is the
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