[four-in-a-row] Review controls-change, sound-animation help pages

[Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>]

commit f622f2e512a85f0c4cf4f13ed70eed3ff618bb81
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date:   Mon Apr 15 21:46:49 2013 -0400

    Review controls-change, sound-animation help pages

 help/C/controls-change.page |   18 +++++++---------
 help/C/sound-animation.page |   46 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++----------
 2 files changed, 43 insertions(+), 21 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/controls-change.page b/help/C/controls-change.page
index cc8cba2..836f96e 100644
--- a/help/C/controls-change.page
+++ b/help/C/controls-change.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
 
     <link type="seealso" xref="controls-default"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="final"/>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -32,24 +32,22 @@
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>In the list, select the line you want to change, then click on the
-      control. This highlights the line and the words
-      <gui>New accelerator…</gui> are now present in place of the
-      old control.</p>
+      control. The line is highlighted and the label of the control changes to
+      <gui>New accelerator…</gui></p>
     </item>
     <item>
       <p>Press the key you want to use instead of the default key.</p>
       <note style="tip">
-        <p>To keep the old setting click <gui>New accelerator…</gui> again,
-        right click on <gui>New accelerator…</gui>, press <key>Esc</key> or
-        click anywhere else inside the <gui>Keyboard Controls</gui> box.</p>
+        <p>To keep the old setting, click again or right click on
+        <gui>New accelerator…</gui>, press <key>Esc</key> or click anywhere else
+        inside the <gui>Keyboard Controls</gui> box.</p>
       </note>
     </item>
   </steps>
 
   <note style="info">
-    <p>When you are playing with a friend or a family member, both players
-    will share the same set of controls, to be used alternately during your
-    respective turns.</p>
+    <p>When you are playing with a friend or a family member, both players will
+    use the same controls.</p>
   </note>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/help/C/sound-animation.page b/help/C/sound-animation.page
index 517c8c3..2fda482 100644
--- a/help/C/sound-animation.page
+++ b/help/C/sound-animation.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="index#preferences"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="draft"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="final"/>
 
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
 
@@ -13,29 +13,53 @@
       <name>Aruna Sankaranarayanan</name>
       <email>safincrazy gmail com</email>
     </credit>
+    <credit type="editor">
+      <name>Michael Hill</name>
+      <email>mdhillca gmail com</email>
+    </credit>
 
-    <desc>Play <app>Four-in-a-row</app> without sounds and animation.</desc>
+    <desc>Play <app>Four-in-a-row</app> without sounds or animation.</desc>
   </info>
 
-  <title>Disable sounds and animation</title>
+  <title>Disable sounds or animation</title>
+
+  <section id="sounds">
+  <title>Sounds</title>
+
   <p>When sounds are enabled, you will hear something every time a marble is
-  dropped and at the end of the game. Enabling animation results in a more
-  fluid movement of the marbles. To disable sounds and animation:</p>
+  dropped, or when a game ends.</p>
+
+  <steps>
+    <title>To disable sounds:</title>
+    <item>
+      <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Settings</gui>
+      <gui style="menuitem">Preferences</gui>
+      <gui style="menuitem">Game</gui></guiseq>.</p>
+    </item>
+    <item>
+      <p>Uncheck <gui style="checkbox">Enable sounds</gui>. You can check the
+      option again to enable the feature.</p>
+    </item>
+  </steps>
+  </section>
+
+  <section id="animation">
+  <title>Animation</title>
+
+  <p>Animation results in a more fluid movement of the marbles.</p>
 
   <steps>
+    <title>To disable animation:</title>
     <item>
       <p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Settings</gui>
       <gui style="menuitem">Preferences</gui>
       <gui style="menuitem">Game</gui></guiseq>.</p>
     </item>
     <item>
-      <p>Under <gui>Appearance</gui>, you will see
-      <gui style="checkbox">Enable animation</gui> and
-      <gui style="checkbox">Enable sounds</gui>. Click on the small
-      square next to the feature you want to disable. This unchecks the
-      feature. You can check the square again if you
-      want to enable the feature.</p>
+      <p>Uncheck <gui style="checkbox">Enable animation</gui>. You can check the
+      option again to enable the feature.</p>
     </item>
   </steps>
+  </section>
 
 </page>