[four-in-a-row] Reviewed some help pages and marked final
- From: Aruna Sankaranarayanan <arunasank src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [four-in-a-row] Reviewed some help pages and marked final
- Date: Tue, 30 Apr 2013 15:31:18 +0000 (UTC)
commit 32a9bedc2fc3ad1cf156e137e9f17bdc3685297d
Author: Michael Hill <mdhillca gmail com>
Date: Sun Apr 14 19:29:33 2013 -0400
Reviewed some help pages and marked final
help/C/appearance.page | 13 ++++++-------
help/C/basics.page | 2 +-
help/C/controls-default.page | 2 +-
help/C/index.page | 2 +-
help/C/make-easy.page | 16 ++++++++--------
help/C/scores.page | 2 +-
6 files changed, 18 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/appearance.page b/help/C/appearance.page
index d062756..20275c6 100644
--- a/help/C/appearance.page
+++ b/help/C/appearance.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#preferences"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="draft"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="final"/>
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
@@ -20,20 +20,19 @@
<title>Change the appearance of your gaming area</title>
<p>By default, <app>Four-in-a-row</app> uses solid red and blue marbles
- against a black grid when you start a new game. In order to use a different
- theme:</p>
+ against a black grid when you start a new game.</p>
<steps>
+ <title>To use a different theme:</title>
<item>
<p>Select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Settings</gui>
<gui style="menuitem">Preferences</gui>
<gui style="menuitem">Game</gui></guiseq>.</p>
</item>
<item>
- <p>Under <gui>Appearance</gui>, you will see
- <gui style="group">Theme</gui>. Pick the theme of your choice from
- the drop down menu present on the right of <gui>Theme</gui>. The change
- will be reflected immediately in the game window.</p>
+ <p>Under <gui>Appearance</gui>, pick the theme of your choice from
+ the drop down menu to the right of <gui style="group">Theme</gui>. The
+ change will be reflected immediately in the game window.</p>
</item>
</steps>
diff --git a/help/C/basics.page b/help/C/basics.page
index 4b2d408..a2ba228 100644
--- a/help/C/basics.page
+++ b/help/C/basics.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="draft"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="final"/>
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
diff --git a/help/C/controls-default.page b/help/C/controls-default.page
index f570645..37ee39d 100644
--- a/help/C/controls-default.page
+++ b/help/C/controls-default.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
<link type="seealso" xref="controls-change"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="draft"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="final"/>
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
diff --git a/help/C/index.page b/help/C/index.page
index 768af06..b6e4b0a 100644
--- a/help/C/index.page
+++ b/help/C/index.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
id="index">
<info>
- <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="draft"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="final"/>
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
diff --git a/help/C/make-easy.page b/help/C/make-easy.page
index dfea585..860717f 100644
--- a/help/C/make-easy.page
+++ b/help/C/make-easy.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="draft"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="final"/>
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
@@ -30,9 +30,9 @@
a different square in the game area to change your move.</p>
<note style="info">
- <p>You can undo all your moves starting from your current move till you
- reach a favourable state of the game or till the beginning of your current
- game by pressing <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>Z</key></keyseq>
+ <p>You can undo all your moves starting from your current move until you
+ reach a favourable state of the game, or until the beginning of your current
+ game, by pressing <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>Z</key></keyseq>
repeatedly.</p>
</note>
</section>
@@ -40,10 +40,10 @@
<section id="hint">
<title>Use hints</title>
- <p>If you are not sure of your next move, you can use a hint. On using one,
- your marble moves to the top of the column that is the best choice
- strategy-wise and blinks. You can then drop your marble in that column. To
- use a hint select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Game</gui>
+ <p>If you are not sure of your next move, you can use a hint. When you use a
+ hint, your marble moves to the top of the column that is the best choice,
+ strategy-wise, and blinks. You can then drop your marble into that column. To
+ use a hint, select <guiseq><gui style="menu">Game</gui>
<gui style="menuitem">Hint</gui></guiseq> or press
<keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>H</key></keyseq>.</p>
diff --git a/help/C/scores.page b/help/C/scores.page
index 3eca6d8..a9b40bf 100644
--- a/help/C/scores.page
+++ b/help/C/scores.page
@@ -5,7 +5,7 @@
<info>
<link type="guide" xref="index#play"/>
- <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="draft"/>
+ <revision pkgversion="3.8" version="0.1" date="2013-03-29" status="final"/>
<include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
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