[release-notes/gnome-3-6] files - polish

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit 2212e29b163ed5b40450de299ae3fc617392fd64
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Tue Sep 18 00:36:24 2012 +0100

    files - polish

 help/C/users-files.page |   30 ++++++++++++++++--------------
 1 files changed, 16 insertions(+), 14 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/users-files.page b/help/C/users-files.page
index c33368a..bd1b99a 100644
--- a/help/C/users-files.page
+++ b/help/C/users-files.page
@@ -30,7 +30,7 @@
   <!-- TODO - needs screenshot -->
 
   <p>
-    The Files application has been a major focus for work in the 3.6 cycle. The newest 
+    The <app>Files</app> application (also known as Nautilus) has been a major focus for work in the 3.6 cycle. The newest 
     release includes many new features and a large number of bug fixes, resulting in a 
     more functional and effective application.
   </p>
@@ -40,17 +40,16 @@
 
     <p>
      A new location containing recently used files has been added. This provides 
-     convenient access to files that are likely to be relevant. It is also serves 
-     a reminding function for things, ensuring that they stay on your radar. The new 
-     <gui>Recent</gui> location is shown when the Files application is first started, 
-     meaning that it is immediately useful.
+     convenient access to files that are likely to be relevant, and also serves a useful 
+     reminding function. The new <gui>Recent</gui> location is shown when the <app>Files</app> 
+     application is first started, meaning that it is immediately useful.
     </p>
   </section>
 
   <section id="users-files-search">
     <title>Functional Search</title>
     <p>
-     Files (also known as Nautilus) has never had an effective search capability. 
+     <app>Files</app> has never had an effective search capability. 
      With GNOME 3.6, this omission has finally been rectified. The new version includes 
      a powerful search feature, which can be used by simply typing. It is case insensitive, 
      can search for hidden files or directories, can work recursively, doesn't only 
@@ -64,8 +63,12 @@
     <p>
      A number of common workflows have been improved with the new version of Files. 
      These enable users to take actions based on context, and aims to make common 
-     actions simple and straightforward. A new workflow has been added for copying and 
-     moving files, and offers a nice alternative to copy and past and drag and drop. 
+     actions simple and straightforward.
+    </p>
+    <p>
+     The inclusion of new <gui>Move To...</gui> and <gui>Copy To...</gui> actions in 
+     context menus is one new workflow that offers a useful alternative to copy and 
+     past and drag and drop. 
     </p>
     <p>
      Another addition that makes a common action that little bit easier is the <gui>New 
@@ -78,7 +81,7 @@
     <title>Coherence and Consistency</title>
     <p>
      Many small changes have been introduced to spread consistency all across 
-     the application. Common usage patterns have been identified and they are
+     the <app>Files</app> application. Common usage patterns have been identified and they are
      followed in every single aspect of <app>Files</app>. In this regard, a 
      much improved and space efficient maximized window state, a more consistent
      menu layout and behavior, more consistent use of icons, and a more GNOME 3 
@@ -89,11 +92,10 @@
   <section id="users-files-polish">
     <title>Polish</title>
     <p>
-     A large number of smaller enhancements have also been made to the Files 
-     application for this release. Date and time have been cleaned up, 
-     making modification dates easier to read and less intrusive. The menus have 
-     also been refined, and the preferences window polished, creating a more 
-     streamlined application.
+     A large number of smaller enhancements have also been made to the <app>Files</app> 
+     application for this release. Date and time formats have been cleaned up, 
+     making date and time information easier to read and less intrusive. The menus have 
+     also been cleaned up and the preferences window has been polished.
     </p>
   </section>