[release-notes/gnome-3-6] system settings - minor polish

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit d0a5c1507e8554e718b0e7833ebaea158eedbf8e
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Tue Sep 18 00:25:44 2012 +0100

    system settings - minor polish

 help/C/users-system-settings.page |   13 +++++--------
 1 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-)
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diff --git a/help/C/users-system-settings.page b/help/C/users-system-settings.page
index 71b1f1c..bf2ba61 100644
--- a/help/C/users-system-settings.page
+++ b/help/C/users-system-settings.page
@@ -70,7 +70,7 @@
 <!-- http://blogs.gnome.org/mclasen/2012/08/21/rounding-out-the-3-6-feature-list/ -->
 
     <p>
-      GNOME 3.6 includes a revamped <gui>Mouse &amp; Touchpad</gui> settings section. 
+      GNOME 3.6 includes revamped <gui>Mouse &amp; Touchpad</gui> settings. 
       The old settings panel was overhauled to provide a set of options that are much easier 
       to understand. It also features a pretty new test area which enables scrolling settings 
       to be tested - something that wasn't possible previously.
@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@
     <media type="image" src="figures/users-system-settings-sound.png" />
 
     <p>
-      The Sound panel has been made easier to use by removing the <gui>Hardware</gui> tab.
+      The <gui>Sound</gui> panel has been made easier to use by removing the <gui>Hardware</gui> tab.
       Instead, the device lists in the <gui>Input</gui> and <gui>Output</gui> tabs offer more 
       fine-grained choices. This improvement relies on <sys>Pulseaudio 2.0</sys>.
     </p>
@@ -131,12 +131,9 @@
     <media type="image" src="figures/users-system-settings-universal-access.png" />
 
     <p>
-     The <gui>Universal Access</gui> settings have been redesigned in order to offer a more
-     coherent and easy to use experience. All the elements of the <gui>Universal Access</gui> 
-     settings follow the same layout in all the sections, which provides a more consistent 
-     interface.
-    </p>
-    <p>The zoom options dialog has been redesigned to accommodate new settings for brightness, 
+     The <gui>Universal Access</gui> settings have been redesigned in order to make them more
+     coherent and easy to use. All of the sections now follow the same layout. The zoom options 
+     dialog has also been redesigned to accommodate new settings for brightness, 
      contrast, inversion and grayscale. A <link xref="a11y-magnifier-bightness-contrast-inversion"> 
      detailed explanation of these new settings is available</link>.
     </p>