[release-notes/gnome-3-4] [users] polishing

[Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>]

commit f181f84304985a7a30af0df5f78842981846f604
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Tue Mar 20 12:12:23 2012 +0000

    [users] polishing

 help/C/rnusers.xml |   36 +++++++++++++++++-------------------
 1 files changed, 17 insertions(+), 19 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rnusers.xml b/help/C/rnusers.xml
index 35206f0..da98ca3 100644
--- a/help/C/rnusers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnusers.xml
@@ -188,7 +188,7 @@
   </sect2>
 
   <sect2 id="rnusers.details">
-    <title>Lots of Smaller Improvements</title>
+    <title>A Bonanza of Smaller Improvements</title>
     <para>
       Incremental improvements and polishing has been a big focus for this release. 
       The result is a large number of smaller improvements which add up to a big 
@@ -316,7 +316,7 @@
   </sect2>
 
  <sect2 id="rnusers.hardware">
-    <title>Improved Hardware Support</title>
+    <title>Better Hardware Support</title>
     <para>
       Several of the smaller improvements that feature in this release address hardware support 
       and integration, making GNOME 3 work with more hardware devices, and providing a more 
@@ -427,25 +427,26 @@ Metabug: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=668503 | gnome-session: http
   <sect2 id="apps-more">
     <title>Many Application Enhancements</title>
     <para>
-      TODO: many more. yada yada.
+      There are plenty of other improvements to GNOME's applications in this release. As well as the usual 
+      bug fixing work, there are visible enhancements and new features. Here are some of them:
     </para>
       <itemizedlist>
         <listitem><para>
-	  		  The file manager <application>Nautilus</application> provides Undo 
-		  		support which allows you to revert a change your made.
+	  		  The file manager <application>Nautilus</application> now includes an Undo function
+		  		which allows you to revert changes you might have made. Great for correcting mistakes!
         </para></listitem>
         <listitem><para>
-          <application>Sound Juicer</application> has a new metadata fetching facility which 
-          provides enhanced support for multi-disc albums.
+          The <application>Sound Juicer</application> CD ripper has a new metadata fetching facility 
+          which provides enhanced support for multi-disc albums.
         </para></listitem>
 <!-- https://live.gnome.org/Gedit/RoadMap | http://blogs.gnome.org/jessevdk/2012/01/15/gedit-3-2-6-released-for-os-x-native/ -->
         <listitem><para>
-				  The text editor <application>gedit</application> received native support for Mac OS X.
+				  The text editor <application>gedit</application> will now run on Mac OS X as well as GNOME.
         </para></listitem>
 <!-- https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=666718 -->
         <listitem><para>
-				  The webcam booth <application>Cheese</application> now uses WebM by 
-				  default as video format instead of Theora.
+				  The webcam booth <application>Cheese</application> now uses WebM as its  
+				  default video format (instead of Theora).
         </para></listitem>
 <!-- https://mail.gnome.org/archives/nautilus-list/2012-January/msg00011.html -->
         <listitem><para>
@@ -454,7 +455,7 @@ Metabug: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=668503 | gnome-session: http
         </para></listitem>
 <!-- http://blixtra.org/blog/2011/11/23/gnome-system-monitor-swatting-bugs/ -->
         <listitem><para>
-				  <application>GNOME System Monitor</application> received 
+				  <application>GNOME System Monitor</application> has received 
   				<ulink url="http://www.mjmwired.net/kernel/Documentation/cgroups.txt";>Control Groups</ulink> support.
         </para></listitem>
         <listitem><para>
@@ -464,18 +465,15 @@ Metabug: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=668503 | gnome-session: http
 <!-- http://mbarnes.livejournal.com/4590.html 
 http://git.gnome.org/browse/evolution/commit/?id=e0548d2 and https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=351025 -->
         <listitem><para>
-				  With the mail and calendar groupware client 
-				  <application>Evolution</application> it is now possible to connect to 
-				  <ulink url="http://www.kolab.org/";>Kolab Groupware</ulink> servers. Multiple 
-					Kolab accounts can be used at the same time. Full offline support, 
-					extended Free/Busy lists and synchronization conflict detection and 
-					resolution are supported.
+          It is now possible to use <application>Evolution</application> to connect to 
+				  <ulink url="http://www.kolab.org/";>Kolab Groupware</ulink> servers. It is possible to use 
+          multiple Kolab accounts at the same time. Full offline support, extended free/busy lists, 
+          synchronization conflict detection and resolution are also all supported.
         </para></listitem>
 				<listitem><para>
           <application>Evolution</application>'s account setup assistant will also automatically 
           detect common email providers, making it less work to setup your email account. As an added 
-          bonus, <application>Evolution</application> will now also let you reorder your email accounts 
-          in the sidebar.
+          bonus, it will now also let you reorder your email accounts in the sidebar.
           </para></listitem>
         </itemizedlist>
 	</sect2>