[release-notes/gnome-3-4] [users] small updates

From: Allan Day <allanday src gnome org>
To: commits-list gnome org
Cc:
Subject: [release-notes/gnome-3-4] [users] small updates
Date: Mon, 19 Mar 2012 17:10:40 +0000 (UTC)
commit 33a0f9cd06b8f66ae53b041e68c882ee5ba8ea7c
Author: Allan Day <allanpday gmail com>
Date:   Mon Mar 19 17:10:26 2012 +0000

    [users] small updates

 help/C/rnusers.xml |   65 ++++++++++++++++++++++++++-------------------------
 1 files changed, 33 insertions(+), 32 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/rnusers.xml b/help/C/rnusers.xml
index 7f726c3..97130bb 100644
--- a/help/C/rnusers.xml
+++ b/help/C/rnusers.xml
@@ -141,13 +141,14 @@
       <application>Web</application> and <application>Contacts</application>, are 
       making use of application menus for this release.
     </para>
+<!--
     <para>
       TODO: This might all be lies + structure needs work. [aday: this is all news to me]
       When maximized, supporting applications will hide their menu bar. An
       exception has been made for focus-follows-mouse users; for them, the menus
       will never be hidden. This as a hidden menu bar is more difficult to use
       while using focus-follows-mouse.
-    </para>
+    </para> -->
   </sect3>
 
   <sect3 id="rnusers.interface-components">
@@ -249,17 +250,20 @@
         nicer as a result.
       </para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>
-        Several important improvements have been made to notifications. Notification pop-ups are more 
-        intelligent now and will avoid the mouse or touchpad pointer, so that they won't get in your way. 
-        The message tray, which displays a summary of your notifications, is now shown when you don't 
-        interact with your device for a short period of time. This makes it easier to be aware of ongoing 
-        conversations or unanswered messages.
-        TODO: check this [aday: the 2nd point is in 3.2, isn't it? not sure what the final point means]
+        Notification pop-ups are more intelligent now and will avoid the mouse or touchpad pointer, so 
+        that they won't get in your way.
+      </para></listitem>
+      <listitem><para>
+        Another important enhancement to notifications is that the message tray, which displays a 
+        summary of your notifications, is now shown when you don't interact with your device for a 
+        short period of time. This makes it easier to be aware of ongoing conversations or unanswered 
+        messages.
+      </para></listitem>
+<!--        TODO: check this [aday: the 2nd point is in 3.2, isn't it? not sure what the final point means]
         Secondly, if you
         were away a summary of the notification will be shown once you are back.
         Lastly, we have limited the notification overview trigger to only the
-        lower right corner as to avoid interacting with certain applications.
-      </para></listitem>
+        lower right corner as to avoid interacting with certain applications. -->
     </itemizedlist>
   </sect3>
 
@@ -294,7 +298,7 @@
 
 </sect2>
 
-<sect2 id="other">
+<sect2 id="rnusers.other">
   <title>Other Changes</title>
   <para>
     There are other things too, of course.
@@ -325,7 +329,7 @@
     </itemizedlist>
   </sect3>
 
-	<sect3 id="user-docs">
+	<sect3 id="rnusers.user-docs">
 	  <title>Documentation That Really Helps You</title>
     <para>
       Traditional user documentation is written like a paper book; a good story,
@@ -369,7 +373,7 @@
       </itemizedlist>
 	</sect3>
 
-	<sect3 id="empathy">
+	<sect3 id="rnusers.empathy">
     <title>Empathy Gains Video Calling and Live Messenger Support</title>
     <itemizedlist>
       <listitem><para>
@@ -379,8 +383,8 @@
         New ability to chat with users of Windows Live Messaging.
       </para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>
-        TODO: Accounts dialog partially re-designed: the tech details of the account 
-        are not hidden in their own dialog.
+        The accounts dialog has been partially re-designed, giving it a simplified interface 
+        that is easier to use.
       </para></listitem>
       <listitem><para>
         Improved integration with GNOME Contacts, which simplies the user interface and means 
@@ -396,7 +400,7 @@
 Metabug: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=668503 | gnome-session: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=666891 | gnome-system-monitor: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=667829 | gnome-packagekit: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=666788 | control center user accounts: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=666573 and https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=658352 | settings-daemon: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=666787 | nm: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=666783
 -->
 
-  <sect3 id="nautilus-undo">
+  <sect3 id="rnusers.nautilus-undo">
     <title>Undo File Operations</title>
       <para>
 			  The file manager <application>Nautilus</application> provides Undo 
@@ -404,17 +408,16 @@ Metabug: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=668503 | gnome-session: http
       </para>
   </sect3>
 
-  <sect3 id="sound-juicer">
-    <title>Better Music Ripping</title>
-      <para>
-        New metadata fetching facility which provides enhanced support for multi-disc albums.
-      </para>
-  </sect3>
-
-
   <sect3 id="apps-more">
     <title>Many Other Application Enhancements</title>
+    <para>
+      TODO: many more. yada yada.
+    </para>
       <itemizedlist>
+        <listitem><para>
+          <application>Sound Juicer</application> has a new metadata fetching facility which 
+          provides enhanced support for multi-disc albums.
+        </para></listitem>
 <!-- https://live.gnome.org/Gedit/RoadMap | http://blogs.gnome.org/jessevdk/2012/01/15/gedit-3-2-6-released-for-os-x-native/ -->
         <listitem><para>
 				  The text editor <application>gedit</application> received native support for Mac OS X.
@@ -426,8 +429,8 @@ Metabug: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=668503 | gnome-session: http
         </para></listitem>
 <!-- https://mail.gnome.org/archives/nautilus-list/2012-January/msg00011.html -->
         <listitem><para>
-          TODO: gnome-games improvements: https://live.gnome.org/GnomeGames/Modernisation , 
-          e.g. using app menus or refreshed look
+<!-- https://live.gnome.org/GnomeGames/Modernisation -->
+          GNOME's games have been modernized. Status bars have been removed, application menus added, and more.
         </para></listitem>
 <!-- http://blixtra.org/blog/2011/11/23/gnome-system-monitor-swatting-bugs/ -->
         <listitem><para>
@@ -435,25 +438,23 @@ Metabug: https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=668503 | gnome-session: http
   				<ulink url="http://www.mjmwired.net/kernel/Documentation/cgroups.txt";>Control Groups</ulink> support.
         </para></listitem>
         <listitem><para>
-				  The image viewer <application>Eye of GNOME</application> again provides 
-				  an image metadata view in its sidebar. It displays the most common data 
-				  values to improve readability.
+				  The image viewer <application>Eye of GNOME</application> has a new image metadata sidebar. 
+          This makes it easy to browse images and see their proprties at the same time.
         </para></listitem>
 <!-- http://mbarnes.livejournal.com/4590.html 
 http://git.gnome.org/browse/evolution/commit/?id=e0548d2 and https://bugzilla.gnome.org/show_bug.cgi?id=351025 -->
         <listitem><para>
 				  With the mail and calendar groupware client 
 				  <application>Evolution</application> it is now possible to connect to 
-				  <ulink url="http://www.kolab.org/";>Kolab Groupware</ulink> servers by 
-				  using the <application>evolution-kolab</application> backend. Multiple 
+				  <ulink url="http://www.kolab.org/";>Kolab Groupware</ulink> servers. Multiple 
 					Kolab accounts can be used at the same time. Full offline support, 
 					extended Free/Busy lists and synchronization conflict detection and 
 					resolution are supported.</para>
 				  <para>When you set up your mail account you do not have to enter server 
 				    data anymore. If you use a common mail provider, just enter your email
 				    address and all the server details will be populated for you, making 
-				    account setup quick and easy.</para><para>You can now also have a custom 
-				    order of your mail accounts in the left pane.
+				    account setup quick and easy.</para>
+          <para>You can now also have a custom order of your mail accounts in the left pane.
           </para></listitem>
         </itemizedlist>
 	</sect3>
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