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[gnome-user-docs] minor edits to files-autorun and files-browse. files-tilde.page marked as review.

commit c2bd5bb25808ee74da76c9f73e1d1e445df49772
Author: Jim Campbell <jwcampbell gmail com>
Date:   Sat Feb 18 19:37:06 2012 +0100

    minor edits to files-autorun and files-browse. files-tilde.page marked as review.

 gnome-help/C/files-autorun.page |   49 +++++++++++++++++++++-----------------
 gnome-help/C/files-browse.page  |   20 +++++++++++----
 gnome-help/C/files-tilde.page   |    8 ++----
 3 files changed, 44 insertions(+), 33 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/files-autorun.page b/gnome-help/C/files-autorun.page
index 68fcf70..168f14b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/files-autorun.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/files-autorun.page
@@ -8,7 +8,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="media#music"/>
     <link type="guide" xref="files#removable"/>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
     
     <desc>Automatically run applications for CDs and DVDs, cameras,
     audio players, and other devices and media.</desc>
@@ -23,26 +23,25 @@
 
 <title>Open applications for devices or discs</title>
 
-<comment>
-<cite date="2012-02-19">shaunm</cite>
-<p>For 3.4, this is merged into System Info. Make sure to update in six months.</p>
-</comment>
-
-<p>You can have an application automatically start when you plug in a device
+<p>You can have an application automatically fucking start when you plug in a device
 or insert a disc or media card. For example, you might want your photo organizer
 to start when you plug in a digital camera. You can also turn this off, so that
 nothing happens when you plug something in.</p>
 
-<p>To decide which applications should start when you plug in various devices:</p>
+<p>To decide which applications should start when you plug in various devices:
+</p>
 
 <steps>
-  <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Open <gui>Removable Media</gui>.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>System Settings</gui>.
+  </p></item>
+  <item><p>Select <guiseq><gui>Details</gui><gui>Removable Media</gui></guiseq>.
+  </p></item>
   <item>
-    <p>Choose an application or action for the desired device or media type. See
-    below for a description of the different types of devices and media.</p>
+    <p>Find your desired device or media type, and then choose an application 
+    or action for that media type. See below for a description of the different 
+    types of devices and media.</p>
     <p>Instead of starting an application, you can also set it so that the device
-    will be shown in the file manager (<gui>Open folder</gui>), you will be asked
+    will be shown in the file manager. When that happens, you will be asked
     what to do, or nothing will happen automatically.</p>
   </item>
   <item>
@@ -55,11 +54,14 @@ nothing happens when you plug something in.</p>
 </steps>
 
 <note style="tip">
-<p>If you don't want any applications to be opened automatically, whatever you plug in, select <gui>Never prompt or start programs on media insertion</gui> at the bottom of the Removable Media window.</p>
+<p>If you don't want any applications to be opened automatically, whatever you 
+plug in, select <gui>Never prompt or start programs on media insertion</gui> at 
+the bottom of the Removable Media window.</p>
 </note>
 
-<terms>
+<section id="files-types-of-devices">
   <title>Types of devices and media</title>
+<terms>
   <item>
     <title>Audio discs</title>
     <p>Choose your favorite music application or CD audio extractor to handle
@@ -73,19 +75,21 @@ nothing happens when you plug something in.</p>
     <p>Choose your favorite video application to handle video DVDs. Use the
     <gui>Other Media</gui> button to set an application for Blu-ray, HD DVD,
     video CD (VCD), and super video CD (SVCD). If DVDs or other video discs
-    do not work correctly when you insert them, see <link xref="video-dvd"/>.</p>
+    do not work correctly when you insert them, see <link xref="video-dvd"/>.
+    </p>
   </item>
   <item>
     <title>Blank discs</title>
-    <p>Use the <gui>Other Media</gui> button to select a disc-writing application
-    for blank CDs, blank DVDs, blank Blu-ray discs, and blank HD DVDs.</p>
+    <p>Use the <gui>Other Media</gui> button to select a disc-writing 
+    application for blank CDs, blank DVDs, blank Blu-ray discs, and blank HD 
+    DVDs.</p>
   </item>
   <item>
     <title>Cameras and photos</title>
-    <p>Use the <gui>Photos</gui> drop-down to choose a photo-management application
-    to run when you plug in your digital camera, or when you insert a media card
-    from a camera, such as a CF, SD, MMC, or MS card. You can also simply browse
-    your photos using the file manager.</p>
+    <p>Use the <gui>Photos</gui> drop-down to choose a photo-management 
+    application to run when you plug in your digital camera, or when you insert 
+    a media card from a camera, such as a CF, SD, MMC, or MS card. You can also 
+    simply browse your photos using the file manager.</p>
     <p>Under <gui>Other Media</gui>, you can select an application to open Kodak
     picture CDs, such as those you might have made in a store. These are regular
     data CDs with JPEG images in a folder called <file>PICTURES</file>.</p>
@@ -111,4 +115,5 @@ nothing happens when you plug something in.</p>
     </note>
  </item>
 </terms>
+</section>
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/files-browse.page b/gnome-help/C/files-browse.page
index fc53b1e..d5fd854 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/files-browse.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/files-browse.page
@@ -2,12 +2,13 @@
       type="topic" style="task"
       id="files-browse">
 
+
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="files" group="#first"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="files-copy"/>
     <desc>Manage and organize files with the file manager.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
       <email>tiffany antopolski gmail com</email>
@@ -25,6 +26,14 @@
 
 <title>Browse files and folders</title>
 
+<comment>
+	<p>This page is a feature overview. There should be a greater visual 
+	separation between features. Small illustrative figures should be used 
+	to display these features where appropriate, and video demonstrations of 
+	some of the features might be useful too. Explain how you can add things to 
+	the sidebar (link to a topic or explain it here).</p>
+</comment>
+
 <p>Use the <app>Files</app> file manager to browse and organize the files on 
 your computer. You can also use it to manage files on storage devices (like 
 external hard disks), on <link xref="nautilus-connect">file servers</link>, and 
@@ -35,6 +44,9 @@ overview. You can also search for files and folders through the overview in the
 same way you would <link xref="shell-apps-open">search for applications</link>. 
 </p>
 
+<section id="files-view-folder-contents">
+  <title>Exploring the contents of folders</title>
+
 <p>In the file manager, double-click any folder to view its contents,
 and double-click any file to open it with the default application for
 that file. You can also right-click a folder to open it in a new tab
@@ -72,9 +84,5 @@ find it more useful to show a <em>tree</em> in the sidebar instead. Click
 to enable the tree sidebar. Click the expander arrow next to a folder to
 show its child folders in the tree, or click a folder to open it
 in the window.</p>
-
-<comment>
-	<p>This page is a feature overview. There should be a greater visual separation between features. Small illustrative figures should be used to display these features where appropriate, and video demonstrations of some of the features might be useful too. Explain how you can add things to the sidebar (link to a topic or explain it here).</p>
-</comment>
-
+</section>
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/files-tilde.page b/gnome-help/C/files-tilde.page
index eb5a124..fe986ab 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/files-tilde.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/files-tilde.page
@@ -7,7 +7,7 @@
     <link type="seealso" xref="files-hidden"/>
     <desc>These are backup files. They are hidden by default.</desc>
 
-    <revision pkgversion="3.4" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="review"/>
 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Phil Bull</name>
@@ -18,17 +18,15 @@
 
 <title>What is a file with a "~" at the end of its name?</title>
 
-<note>
   <p>Files with a "~" at the end of their names (for example,
  <file>example.txt~</file>) are automatically created backup copies of documents
- edited in the <app>Gedit</app> text editor or other applications. It is
+ edited in the <app>gedit</app> text editor or other applications. It is
  normally safe to delete them, but there really is no need.</p>
 
   <p>These files are hidden by default. If you are seeing them, that is because
  you either selected <guiseq><gui>View</gui><gui>Hidden Files</gui></guiseq> or
  pressed <keyseq><key>Ctrl</key><key>H</key></keyseq>. You can hide them again
- by repeating one of these steps.</p> 
-</note>
+ by repeating either of these steps.</p> 
 
   <p>These files are treated in the same way as normal hidden files. See
  <link xref="files-hidden"/> for advice on dealing with hidden files.</p>
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