[gnome-user-docs] Minor edits, distinguish dual monitors pages



commit 5d64c4a57f911bf8c0561504e7a6f574ebd0b0a3
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>
Date:   Tue Aug 21 19:08:49 2012 -0400

    Minor edits, distinguish dual monitors pages

 gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors-desktop.page |   10 +++-------
 gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page         |    4 ++--
 2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors-desktop.page b/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors-desktop.page
index ab41b58..b839a95 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors-desktop.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors-desktop.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="display-dual-monitors-desktop">
 
   <info>
-    <desc>Set up dual monitors.</desc>
+    <desc>Set up dual monitors on your desktop computer.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="3.5.5" version="0.1" date="2012-08-20" status="review"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
@@ -19,11 +19,9 @@
 
   </info>
 
-<title>Connect an extra monitor to your desktop computer</title>
+<title>Connect an extra monitor</title>
 
-  <section id="steps">
-  <title>Set up an external monitor</title>
-  <p>To set up a second monitor with your desktop computer, connect the monitor.
+ <p>To set up a second monitor with your desktop computer, connect the monitor.
      If your system doesn't recognize it immediately, or you would like to adjust
      the settings:
   </p>
@@ -56,7 +54,5 @@
            corner.
   </p></item>
   </steps>
-</section>
-
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page b/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page
index 11ca051..cebb6e1 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
       id="display-dual-monitors">
 
   <info>
-    <desc>Set up dual monitors.</desc>
+    <desc>Set up dual monitors on your laptop.</desc>
     <revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
@@ -112,4 +112,4 @@
 </section>
 
 
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>



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