[gnome-user-docs] Minor edits, distinguish dual monitors pages
- From: Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [gnome-user-docs] Minor edits, distinguish dual monitors pages
- Date: Tue, 21 Aug 2012 23:11:19 +0000 (UTC)
commit 5d64c4a57f911bf8c0561504e7a6f574ebd0b0a3
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>
Date: Tue Aug 21 19:08:49 2012 -0400
Minor edits, distinguish dual monitors pages
gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors-desktop.page | 10 +++-------
gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page | 4 ++--
2 files changed, 5 insertions(+), 9 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors-desktop.page b/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors-desktop.page
index ab41b58..b839a95 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors-desktop.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors-desktop.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
id="display-dual-monitors-desktop">
<info>
- <desc>Set up dual monitors.</desc>
+ <desc>Set up dual monitors on your desktop computer.</desc>
<revision pkgversion="3.5.5" version="0.1" date="2012-08-20" status="review"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
@@ -19,11 +19,9 @@
</info>
-<title>Connect an extra monitor to your desktop computer</title>
+<title>Connect an extra monitor</title>
- <section id="steps">
- <title>Set up an external monitor</title>
- <p>To set up a second monitor with your desktop computer, connect the monitor.
+ <p>To set up a second monitor with your desktop computer, connect the monitor.
If your system doesn't recognize it immediately, or you would like to adjust
the settings:
</p>
@@ -56,7 +54,5 @@
corner.
</p></item>
</steps>
-</section>
-
</page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page b/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page
index 11ca051..cebb6e1 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/display-dual-monitors.page
@@ -3,7 +3,7 @@
id="display-dual-monitors">
<info>
- <desc>Set up dual monitors.</desc>
+ <desc>Set up dual monitors on your laptop.</desc>
<revision pkgversion="3.4.0" date="2012-02-19" status="outdated"/>
<credit type="author">
<name>Tiffany Antopolski</name>
@@ -112,4 +112,4 @@
</section>
-</page>
\ No newline at end of file
+</page>
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