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[gnome-user-docs] more 3.2 nominations with minor fixes

commit 964d1d00b99ad2aab7d099ba622edc545a594afe
Author: Michael Hill <mdhill src gnome org>
Date:   Tue Sep 20 20:21:33 2011 -0400

    more 3.2 nominations with minor fixes

 gnome-help/C/sound-alert.page         |    2 +
 gnome-help/C/sound-crackle.page       |   22 +++++++--
 gnome-help/C/sound-nosound.page       |   82 +++++++++++++++++++++++++--------
 gnome-help/C/sound-usemic.page        |    4 +-
 gnome-help/C/sound-usespeakers.page   |    2 +
 gnome-help/C/sound-volume.page        |   34 +++++++++----
 gnome-help/C/user-accounts.page       |    6 ++-
 gnome-help/C/user-add.page            |   45 ++++++++++--------
 gnome-help/C/user-addguest.page       |   28 +++++++----
 gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page   |   35 ++++++++++----
 gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page |   43 +++++++++--------
 gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page  |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/user-delete.page         |    2 +-
 gnome-help/C/video-dvd.page           |   39 ++++++++++++----
 14 files changed, 234 insertions(+), 112 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-alert.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-alert.page
index 7ba8b27..a86e21a 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-alert.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-alert.page
@@ -4,6 +4,8 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="media#sound"/>
 
+   <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-20" status="candidate"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-crackle.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-crackle.page
index 102897a..6564dfb 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-crackle.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-crackle.page
@@ -6,6 +6,8 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="sound-broken"/>
     
     <desc>Check your audio cables and sound card drivers.</desc>
+
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-20" status="candidate"/>
     
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -17,23 +19,33 @@
 
 <title>I hear crackling or buzzing when sounds are playing</title>
 
-<p>If you hear crackling or buzzing when sounds are playing on your computer, you may have a problem with the audio cables or connectors, or a problem with the drivers for the sound card.</p>
+  <p>If you hear crackling or buzzing when sounds are playing on your computer,
+ you may have a problem with the audio cables or connectors, or a problem with
+ the drivers for the sound card.</p>
 
 <list>
  <item>
   <p>Check that the speakers are plugged in correctly.</p>
-  <p>If the speakers aren't fully plugged in, or if they are plugged into the wrong socket, you might hear a buzzing sound.</p>
+  <p>If the speakers aren't fully plugged in, or if they are plugged into the
+  wrong socket, you might hear a buzzing sound.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
   <p>Make sure the speaker/headphone cable isn't damaged.</p>
-  <p>Audio cables and connectors can gradually wear with use. Try plugging the cable or headphones into another audio device (like an MP3 player or a CD player) to check if there is still a crackling sound. If there is, you may need to replace the cable or headphones.</p>
+  <p>Audio cables and connectors can gradually wear with use. Try plugging the
+  cable or headphones into another audio device (like an MP3 player or a CD
+  player) to check if there is still a crackling sound. If there is, you may need
+  to replace the cable or headphones.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
   <p>Check if the sound drivers aren't very good.</p>
-  <p>Some sound cards don't work very well on Linux because they don't have very good drivers. This problem is more difficult to identify. Try searching for the make and model of your sound card on the internet, plus the search term "Linux", to see if other people are having the same problem.</p>
-  <p>You can use the <cmd>lspci</cmd> command to get more information about your sound card.</p>
+  <p>Some sound cards don't work very well on Linux because they don't have very
+  good drivers. This problem is more difficult to identify. Try searching for
+  the make and model of your sound card on the internet, plus the search term
+  "Linux", to see if other people are having the same problem.</p>
+  <p>You can use the <cmd>lspci</cmd> command to get more information about your
+  sound card.</p>
  </item>
 </list>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-nosound.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-nosound.page
index 8d1e18e..b2c57d9 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-nosound.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-nosound.page
@@ -5,8 +5,11 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="sound-broken"/>
     
-    <desc>Check that it's not muted, that cables are plugged in properly, and that the sound card is detected.</desc>
+    <desc>Check that it's not muted, that cables are plugged in properly, and
+ that the sound card is detected.</desc>
     
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-20" status="candidate"/>
+
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -17,49 +20,76 @@
 
 <title>I can't hear any sounds on the computer</title>
 
-<p>If you can't hear any sounds on your computer, for example when you try to play some music, try these troubleshooting steps to see if you can fix the problem.</p>
+  <p>If you can't hear any sounds on your computer, for example when you try to
+ play music, try these troubleshooting steps to see if you can fix the problem.</p>
 
 <section id="mute">
  <title>Make sure that the sound is not muted</title>
- <p>Click the sound icon on the top bar (it looks like a speaker) and make sure that the sound is not muted or turned right down.</p>
- <p>Some laptops have mute switches or keys on their keyboardsâtry pressing that key to see if it unmutes the sound.</p>
- <p>You should also check that you haven't muted the application that you're using to play sound (e.g. your music player or movie player). The application may have a mute or volume button in its main window, so check that. Also, click the sound icon on the top bar and choose <gui>Sound Preferences</gui>. When the <gui>Sound</gui> window appears, go to the <gui>Applications</gui> tab and check that your application is not muted on there.</p>
+ <p>Click the sound icon on the top bar (it looks like a speaker) and make sure
+ that the sound is not muted or turned right down.</p>
+ <p>Some laptops have mute switches or keys on their keyboardsâtry pressing
+ that key to see if it unmutes the sound.</p>
+ <p>You should also check that you haven't muted the application that you're
+ using to play sound (e.g. your music player or movie player). The application
+ may have a mute or volume button in its main window, so check that. Also, click
+ the sound icon on the top bar and choose <gui>Sound Settings</gui>. When the
+ <gui>Sound</gui> window appears, go to the <gui>Applications</gui> tab and
+ check that your application is not muted.</p>
 </section>
 
 <section id="speakers">
  <title>Check that the speakers are turned on and connected properly</title>
- <p>If your computer has external speakers, make sure that they are turned on and that the volume is turned up. Make sure that the speaker cable is securely plugged into the "output" audio socket on the back of the computer. This socket is usually light green in color.</p>
+ <p>If your computer has external speakers, make sure that they are turned on
+ and that the volume is turned up. Make sure that the speaker cable is securely
+ plugged into the "output" audio socket on the back of the computer. This socket
+ is usually light green in color.</p>
  
- <p>Some sound cards are able to switch which socket they use for output (to the speakers) and input (from a microphone, for instance). The output socket may be different when running Linux than on Windows or Mac OS. Try connecting the speaker cable to the different audio sockets on the computer in turn to see if that works.</p>
+ <p>Some sound cards are able to switch which socket they use for output (to the
+ speakers) and input (from a microphone, for instance). The output socket may be
+ different when running Linux than on Windows or Mac OS. Try connecting the
+ speaker cable to the different audio sockets on the computer in turn to see if
+ that works.</p>
  
- <p>A final thing to check is that the audio cable is securely plugged into the back of the speakers. Some speakers have more than one input too.</p>
+ <p>A final thing to check is that the audio cable is securely plugged into the
+ back of the speakers. Some speakers have more than one input too.</p>
 </section>
 
 <section id="device">
  <title>Check that the right sound device is selected</title>
- <p>Some computers have multiple "sound devices" installed. Some of these are capable of outputting sound and some are not, so you should check that you have the correct one selected. This might involve some trial-and-error to choose the right one.</p>
+ <p>Some computers have multiple "sound devices" installed. Some of these are
+ capable of outputting sound and some are not, so you should check that you have
+ the correct one selected. This might involve some trial-and-error to choose the
+ right one.</p>
  <steps>
   <item>
-   <p>Click the sound icon on the top bar and select <gui>Sound Preferences</gui>.</p>
+   <p>Click the sound icon on the top bar and select <gui>Sound Settings</gui>.</p>
   </item>
   <item>
-   <p>In the <gui>Sound</gui> window that appears, go to the <gui>Hardware</gui> tab. Make a note of which device and which profile are selected (so you can return to the default selections if changing them doesn't work).</p>
+   <p>In the <gui>Sound</gui> window that appears, go to the <gui>Hardware</gui>
+ tab. Make a note of which device and which profile are selected (so you can
+ return to the default selections if changing them doesn't work).</p>
   </item>
   <item>
-   <p>For the selected device, try changing the profileâplay a sound after you change the profile to see if it works. You might need to go through the list and try each profile.</p>
+   <p>For the selected device, try changing the profileâplay a sound after you
+ change the profile to see if it works. You might need to go through the list
+ and try each profile.</p>
   </item>
   <item>
-   <p>If that doesn't work, you might want to try doing the same for any other devices that are listed.</p>
+   <p>If that doesn't work, you might want to try doing the same for any other
+ devices that are listed.</p>
   </item>
   <item>
-   <p>Try changing the <gui>Connector</gui> option in the <gui>Output</gui> tab too.</p>
+   <p>Try changing the <gui>Connector</gui> option in the <gui>Output</gui> tab.</p>
   </item>
  </steps>
 </section>
 
 <section id="hardware-detected">
  <title>Check that the sound card was detected properly</title>
- <p>Your sound card may not have been detected properly. If this has happened, your computer will think that it isn't able to play sound. A possible reason for the card not being detected properly is that the drivers for the card are not installed.</p>
+ <p>Your sound card may not have been detected properly. If this has happened,
+ your computer will think that it isn't able to play sound. A possible reason
+ for the card not being detected properly is that the drivers for the card are
+ not installed.</p>
  <steps>
   <item>
    <p>Go to the <gui>Activities</gui> overview and open a Terminal.</p>
@@ -68,17 +98,29 @@
    <p>Type <cmd>aplay -l</cmd> and press <key>Enter</key>.</p>
   </item>
   <item>
-   <p>A list of devices will be shown. If there are no <gui>playback hardware devices</gui>, your sound card has not been detected.</p>
+   <p>A list of devices will be shown. If there are no <gui>playback hardware
+ devices</gui>, your sound card has not been detected.</p>
   </item>
  </steps>
  
- <p>If your sound card is not detected, you may need to manually install the drivers for it. How you do this will depend on the card you have.</p>
+ <p>If your sound card is not detected, you may need to manually install the
+ drivers for it. How you do this will depend on the card you have.</p>
  
- <p>You can see what sound card you have by using the <cmd>lspci</cmd> command in the Terminal. You may have to run <cmd>lspci</cmd> as <link xref="user-admin-explain">superuser</link>; either type <cmd>sudo lspci</cmd> and type your password, or type <cmd>su</cmd>, enter the <em>root</em> (administrative) password, then type <cmd>lspci</cmd>. See if an <em>audio controller</em> or <em>audio device</em> is listedâit should have the sound card's make and model number. <cmd>lspci -v</cmd> will show a list with more detailed information.</p>
+ <p>You can see what sound card you have by using the <cmd>lspci</cmd> command
+ in the Terminal. You may have to run <cmd>lspci</cmd> as
+ <link xref="user-admin-explain">superuser</link>; either type <cmd>sudo lspci</cmd>
+ and type your password, or type <cmd>su</cmd>, enter the <em>root</em>
+ (administrative) password, then type <cmd>lspci</cmd>. See if an
+ <em>audio controller</em> or <em>audio device</em> is listedâit should have the
+ sound card's make and model number. <cmd>lspci -v</cmd> will show a list with
+ more detailed information.</p>
   
- <p>You may be able to find and install drivers for your card. It's best to ask on support forums (or otherwise) for your Linux distribution for instructions.</p>
+ <p>You may be able to find and install drivers for your card. It's best to ask
+ on support forums (or otherwise) for your Linux distribution for instructions.</p>
  
- <p>If you can't get drivers for your sound card, you might prefer to buy a new sound card. You can get sound cards that can be installed inside the computer and external USB sound cards.</p>
+ <p>If you can't get drivers for your sound card, you might prefer to buy a new
+ sound card. You can get sound cards that can be installed inside the computer
+ and external USB sound cards.</p>
 </section>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-usemic.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-usemic.page
index dbaf05a..a801730 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-usemic.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-usemic.page
@@ -3,7 +3,9 @@
       id="sound-usemic">
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="media#sound"/>
-
+ 
+   <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-20" status="candidate"/>
+ 
     <credit type="author">
       <name>Shaun McCance</name>
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-usespeakers.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-usespeakers.page
index 7103ccf..f084d56 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-usespeakers.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-usespeakers.page
@@ -10,6 +10,8 @@
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
     </credit>
 
+   <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-20" status="candidate"/>
+
     <desc>Connect speakers or headphones and select a default audio output device.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
   </info>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/sound-volume.page b/gnome-help/C/sound-volume.page
index 929fe09..4a0a480 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/sound-volume.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/sound-volume.page
@@ -14,6 +14,8 @@
       <email>shaunm gnome org</email>
     </credit>
 
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-20" status="candidate"/>
+
     <desc>Set the sound volume for the computer and control the
     loudness of each application.</desc>
     <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude"/>
@@ -21,22 +23,32 @@
 
 <title>Change the sound volume</title>
 
-<p>To change the sound volume, click the volume icon on the top bar and move the
-volume slider left or right. You can completely turn off sound by dragging the
-slider all the way to the left.</p>
+  <p>To change the sound volume, click the sound icon on the top bar (it looks
+ like a speaker) and move the volume slider left or right. You can completely
+ turn off sound by dragging the slider all the way to the left.</p>
 
-<p>Some keyboards have keys that let you control the volume. They normally look
-like stylized speakers with waves coming out of them. They are often near the
-"F" keys at the top. On laptop keyboards, they are usually on the "F" keys.
-Hold down the <key>Fn</key> key on your keyboard to use them.</p>
+  <p>Some keyboards have keys that let you control the volume. They normally look
+ like stylized speakers with waves coming out of them. They are often near the
+ "F" keys at the top. On laptop keyboards, they are usually on the "F" keys.
+ Hold down the <key>Fn</key> key on your keyboard to use them.</p>
 
-<p>Of course, if you have external speakers, you can also change the volume using the volume control on the speakers themselves. Some headphones have a volume control too.</p>
+  <p>Of course, if you have external speakers, you can also change the volume
+ using the volume control on the speakers themselves. Some headphones have a
+ volume control too.</p>
 
 <section id="apps">
  <title>Changing the sound volume for individual applications</title>
- <p>You can change the volume for one application, but leave the volume for others unchanged. This is useful if you're listening to music and browsing the web, for example. You might want to turn off the volume in the web browser so sounds from websites don't interrupt the music.</p>
- <p>Some applications have volume controls in their main windows. If your application has one of these, use that to change the volume. Otherwise, click the volume icon on the top bar and select <gui>Sound Preferences</gui>. Go to the <gui>Applications</gui> tab and change the volume of the application there.</p>
- <p>Only applications that are playing sounds will be listed. If an application is playing sounds but isn't listed, it might not support the feature that lets you control its volume in this way. In that case, you can't change its volume.</p>
+ <p>You can change the volume for one application, but leave the volume for
+ others unchanged. This is useful if you're listening to music and browsing the
+ web, for example. You might want to turn off the volume in the web browser so
+ sounds from websites don't interrupt the music.</p>
+ <p>Some applications have volume controls in their main windows. If your
+ application has one of these, use that to change the volume. Otherwise, click
+ the sound icon on the top bar and select <gui>Sound Settings</gui>. Go to the
+ <gui>Applications</gui> tab and change the volume of the application there.</p>
+ <p>Only applications that are playing sounds will be listed. If an application
+ is playing sounds but isn't listed, it might not support the feature that lets
+ you control its volume in this way. In that case, you can't change its volume.</p>
 </section>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-accounts.page b/gnome-help/C/user-accounts.page
index 1903ff9..918f8d7 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-accounts.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-accounts.page
@@ -11,6 +11,7 @@
       <link xref="user-changepassword">change password</link>,
       <link xref="user-admin-change">administrators</link>...
     </desc>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-20" status="candidate"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -21,7 +22,10 @@
 
 <title>User accounts</title>
 
-<p>Each person that uses the computer should have a different user account. This allows them to keep their files separate from yours and to choose their own settings. It's also more secure. You can only access a different user account if you know the password.</p>
+  <p>Each person that uses the computer should have a different user account.
+ This allows them to keep their files separate from yours and to choose their
+ own settings. It's also more secure. You can only access a different user
+ account if you know the password.</p>
 
 <section id="manage" style="2column">
   <info>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-add.page b/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
index ec9420f..d927772 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-add.page
@@ -6,6 +6,7 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="user-accounts#manage" group="#first"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="user-addguest"/>
     <desc>Add new users so that other people can log in to the computer.</desc>
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-20" status="candidate"/>
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -31,38 +32,40 @@
   home folder, documents, and settings.</p>
 
 <steps>
-  <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>My Account</gui>.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Click your name on the top bar, then click the picture next to your
+  name to open the <gui>User Accounts</gui> window.</p></item>
   <item><p>Click <gui>Unlock</gui> in the top right corner and type your
   password to make changes. You must be an administrative user to add user
   accounts.</p></item>
   <item><p>In the list of accounts on the left, click the <gui>+</gui> button
   to add a new user account.</p></item>
   <item><p>If you want the new user to have administrative access to the computer,
-  select <gui>Administrator</gui> for the account type in the dropdown menu. Administrators can do things
-  like add and delete users, install software and drivers, and change the date and
-  time.</p></item>
-  <item><p>Enter the new user's full name. The username will be filled in automatically
-  based on the full name. The default is probably OK, but you can change it if you
-  like.</p></item>
+  select <gui>Administrator</gui> for the account type in the dropdown menu.
+  Administrators can do things  like add and delete users, install software and
+  drivers, and change the date and time.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Enter the new user's full name. The username will be filled in
+  automatically based on the full name. The default is probably OK, but you can
+  change it if you  like.</p></item>
   <item><p>Click <gui>Create</gui> when you're done.</p></item>
   <item><p>The account is initially disabled until you choose what to do about
-  the user's password. Under <gui>Login Options</gui> click  <gui>Account disabled</gui> next
-  to <gui>Password</gui>. Use the <gui>Action</gui> drop-down list to set the
-  password now, allow the user to log in without a password, or have the user
-  set their password the first time they log in.</p>
-  <p>If you choose <gui>Set a password now</gui>, have the user type their password
-  in the <gui>New password</gui> and <gui>Confirm password</gui> fields. See
-  <link xref="user-goodpassword"/>.</p>
+  the user's password. Under <gui>Login Options</gui> click  <gui>Account
+  disabled</gui> next to <gui>Password</gui>. Use the <gui>Action</gui> drop-down
+  list to set the password now, allow the user to log in without a password, or
+  have the user set their password the first time they log in.</p>
+  <p>If you choose <gui>Set a password now</gui>, have the user type their
+  password in the <gui>New password</gui> and <gui>Confirm password</gui> fields.
+  See <link xref="user-goodpassword"/>.</p>
   <p>You can also click the button next to the
-  <gui>New password</gui> field to select a randomly generated secure password. These
-  passwords are hard for others to guess, but they can be hard to remember, so
-  be careful.</p></item>
+  <gui>New password</gui> field to select a randomly generated secure password.
+  These passwords are hard for others to guess, but they can be hard to remember,
+  so be careful.</p></item>
   <item><p>Click <gui>Change</gui>.</p></item>
 </steps>
 	
-<note><p>Back in the <gui>User Accounts</gui> window you can click the image next to the user's name on
-the right to set an image for the account. This image will be shown in
-the login window. GNOME provides some stock photos you can use, or you
-can select your own or take a picture with your webcam.</p></note>
+<note><p>Back in the <gui>User Accounts</gui> window you can click the image next
+ to the user's name on the right to set an image for the account. This image will
+ be shown in the login window. GNOME provides some stock photos you can use, or
+ you can select your own or take a picture with your webcam.</p>
+</note>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-addguest.page b/gnome-help/C/user-addguest.page
index bcd8776..126f853 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-addguest.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-addguest.page
@@ -4,7 +4,11 @@
 
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="user-accounts#manage"/>
-    <desc>Allow guests to use your computer temporarily, without having to give them a password.</desc>
+    <desc>Allow guests to use your computer temporarily, without having to give
+ them a password.</desc>
+
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-20" status="candidate"/>
+
     <credit type="maintainer">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
       <email>gnome-doc-list gnome org</email>
@@ -23,12 +27,16 @@
 
 <title>Add a guest user account</title>
 
-<p>You can create a user account for guests, people who will only use the computer on a brief, temporary basis. The guest user will be able to use the programs on your computer, but they won't be able to access your files, change your settings, or install software.</p>
+  <p>You can create a user account for guests, people who will only use the
+ computer on a brief, temporary basis. The guest user will be able to use the
+ programs on your computer, but they won't be able to access your files, change
+ your settings, or install software.</p>
 
 <steps>
   <title>Create a guest user account:</title>
 
-  <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and select <gui>My Account</gui>.</p></item>
+  <item><p>Click your name on the top bar, then click the picture next to your
+  name to open the <gui>User Accounts</gui> window.</p></item>
   <item><p>Click <gui>Unlock</gui> in the top right corner and type your
   password to make changes. You must be an administrative user to add user
   accounts.</p></item>
@@ -40,14 +48,14 @@
   in automatically based on the full name. The default is probably OK, but you
   can change it if you like. Click <gui>Create</gui> when you're done.</p></item>
   <item><p>The new guest user account will be selected. Under <gui>Login Options</gui>,
-  click the label <gui>Account disabled</gui> next to <gui>Password</gui>. You will be presented
-  with a window with password options. From the <gui>Action</gui> drop-down
-  list, select <gui>Log in without a password</gui>.</p></item>
+  click the label <gui>Account disabled</gui> next to <gui>Password</gui>. You
+  will be presented with a window with password options. From the <gui>Action</gui>
+  drop-down list, select <gui>Log in without a password</gui>.</p></item>
 </steps>
 
-<note><p>Back in the <gui>User Accounts</gui> window you can click the image next to the user's name on
-the right to set an image for the account. This image will be shown in
-the login window. GNOME provides some stock photos you can use, or you
-can select your own or take a picture with your webcam.</p></note>
+<note><p>Back in the <gui>User Accounts</gui> window you can click the image
+ next to the user's name on the right to set an image for the account. This image
+ will be shown in the login window. GNOME provides some stock photos you can use,
+ or you can select your own or take a picture with your webcam.</p></note>
 
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page
index eb0e059..3f9b11f 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-admin-change.page
@@ -7,7 +7,8 @@
     <link type="guide" xref="user-accounts#privileges"/>
     <link type="seealso" xref="user-admin-explain" />
     
-    <desc>You can change which users are allowed to make changes to the system by giving them administrative privileges.</desc>
+    <desc>You can change which users are allowed to make changes to the system
+ by giving them administrative privileges.</desc>
 
     <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-19" status="candidate"/>
     
@@ -21,39 +22,51 @@
 
 <title>Change who has administrative privileges</title>
 
-<p>Administrative privileges are a way of deciding who can make changes to important parts of the system. You can change which users have admin privileges and which ones don't. They are a good way of keeping your system secure and preventing potentially damaging unauthorized changes.</p>
+  <p>Administrative privileges are a way of deciding who can make changes to
+ important parts of the system. You can change which users have admin privileges
+ and which ones don't. They are a good way of keeping your system secure and
+ preventing potentially damaging unauthorized changes.</p>
 
 <steps>
  <item>
-    <p>Click your name on the top bar and click the picture next to your
-    name to open the <gui>User Accounts</gui> window.</p>
+    <p>Click your name on the top bar, then click the picture next to your name
+ to open the <gui>User Accounts</gui> window.</p>
  </item>
  
  <item>
-  <p>Click <gui>Unlock</gui> and enter your password to unlock the account settings. (To give a user admin privileges, you must have admin privileges yourself.)</p>
+  <p>Click <gui>Unlock</gui> and enter your password to unlock the account
+ settings. (To give a user admin privileges, you must have admin privileges
+ yourself.)</p>
  </item>
 
  <item>
   <p>Select the user whose privileges you want to change.</p>
   </item>
 
- <item><p>Click the label <gui>Standard</gui> next to <gui>Account type</gui> and select <gui>Administrator</gui>.</p>
+ <item><p>Click the label <gui>Standard</gui> next to <gui>Account type</gui>
+ and select <gui>Administrator</gui>.</p>
  </item>
 
  
  <item>
-  <p>Close the User Accounts window. The user's privileges will be changed when they next log in.</p>
+  <p>Close the User Accounts window. The user's privileges will be changed when
+ they next log in.</p>
   </item>
 </steps>
 
 <note>
- <p>The first user account on the system is usually the one that has admin privileges. This is the user account that was created when you first installed the system.</p>
-<p> It is unwise to have too many users with <gui>Administrator</gui> privileges on one system.</p>
+ <p>The first user account on the system is usually the one that has admin
+ privileges. This is the user account that was created when you first installed
+ the system.</p>
+ <p> It is unwise to have too many users with <gui>Administrator</gui>
+ privileges on one system.</p>
 </note>
 
   <comment>
-   <cite date="2010-10-31" href="mailto:gnome-doc-list gnome org">GNOME Documentation Project</cite>
-   <p>Explain how admin privileges can be given to other people, or removed. Warn the reader about how it's unwise to have too many admins on a system.</p>
+   <cite date="2010-10-31" href="mailto:gnome-doc-list gnome org">GNOME
+ Documentation Project</cite>
+   <p>Explain how admin privileges can be given to other people, or removed.
+ Warn the reader about how it's unwise to have too many admins on a system.</p>
   </comment>
 	
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page b/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
index 68fdb75..2769384 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-changepassword.page
@@ -43,9 +43,10 @@
   keyring pages.</p>
 </comment>
 
-<p>It is a good idea to change your password from time to time, especially if you think someone else knows what your password is.</p>
+  <p>It is a good idea to change your password from time to time, especially if
+  you think someone else knows what your password is.</p>
    <steps>
-    <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and click the picture next to your
+    <item><p>Click your name on the top bar, then click the picture next to your
     name to open the <gui>User Accounts</gui> window.</p></item>
     <item><p>Click the label next to <gui>Password</gui>.</p><note>
     <p>The label should look
@@ -53,34 +54,34 @@
     <item><p>Enter your current password, then a new password. Enter your new
     password again in the <gui>Confirm password</gui> field.</p>
     <p>You can also click the button next to the
-    <gui>New password</gui> field to select a randomly generated secure password. These
-    passwords are hard for others to guess, but they can be hard to remember, so
-    be careful.</p></item>
+    <gui>New password</gui> field to select a randomly generated secure password.
+    These passwords are hard for others to guess, but they can be hard to
+    remember, so be careful.</p></item>
     <item><p>Click <gui>Change</gui>.</p></item>
    </steps>
 
-<p>Make sure you <link xref="user-goodpassword">choose a good password</link>. This will help to keep your user account safe.</p>
+  <p>Make sure you <link xref="user-goodpassword">choose a good password</link>.
+  This will help to keep your user account safe.</p>
 
   <section id="changepass">
     <title>Change the keyring password</title>
 
-  <p>If you change your login password, it may become out of sync with the <em>keyring password</em>.
-  The keyring keeps you from having to remember lots of different passwords by just requiring one
-  <em>master</em> password to access them all. If you change your user password (see above), your keyring password will remain the same as your old password. When you next log in, you will be
-  asked to update your keyring password. If you prefer to change the keyring password (to match your login password) immediately:</p>
+  <p>If you change your login password, it may become out of sync with the
+  <em>keyring password</em>. The keyring keeps you from having to remember lots
+  of different passwords by just requiring one <em>master</em> password to access
+  them all. If you change your user password (see above), your keyring password
+  will remain the same as your old password. When you next log in, you will be
+  asked to update your keyring password. If you prefer to change the keyring
+  password (to match your login password) immediately:</p>
     
   <steps>
-  <item><p>Open the <app>Passwords and Encryption Keys</app> application from
-  the <gui>Activities</gui> overview.</p></item>
-    <item><p>
-    In the <gui>Passwords</gui> tab, right-click on <gui>Passwords: login</gui>.  Select <gui>Change Password</gui>.
-  </p></item>
-    <item><p>
-    Enter your <gui>Old Password</gui>, followed by your new <gui>Password</gui>, and <gui>Confirm</gui> your new password by entering it again.
-  </p></item>
-    <item><p>
-    Click <gui>OK</gui>.
-  </p></item>
+    <item><p>Open the <app>Passwords and Encryption Keys</app> application from
+    the <gui>Activities</gui> overview.</p></item>
+    <item><p>In the <gui>Passwords</gui> tab, right-click on <gui>Passwords: login</gui>.
+    Select <gui>Change Password</gui>.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Enter your <gui>Old Password</gui>, followed by your new <gui>Password</gui>,
+    and <gui>Confirm</gui> your new password by entering it again.</p></item>
+    <item><p>Click <gui>OK</gui>.</p></item>
   </steps>
   </section>
 </page>
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page b/gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page
index a2f1331..09fb90e 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-changepicture.page
@@ -26,7 +26,7 @@
   webcam.</p>
 
   <steps>
-    <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and click the picture next to your
+    <item><p>Click your name on the top bar, then click the picture next to your
     name to open the <gui>User Accounts</gui> window.</p></item>
     <item><p>Click the picture next to your name. A drop-down gallery
     will be shown with some stock login photos. If you like one of
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page b/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page
index 99fc579..c09aaa7 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/user-delete.page
@@ -28,7 +28,7 @@
   your computer, you can delete that user's account.</p>
 
 <steps>
-  <item><p>Click your name on the top bar and click the picture next to your
+  <item><p>Click your name on the top bar, then click the picture next to your
   name to open the <gui>User Accounts</gui> window.</p></item>
   <item><p>Click <gui>Unlock</gui> in the top right corner and type your
   password to make changes. You must be an administrative user to delete user
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/video-dvd.page b/gnome-help/C/video-dvd.page
index c393fa6..c565a7b 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/video-dvd.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/video-dvd.page
@@ -5,7 +5,10 @@
   <info>
     <link type="guide" xref="media#videos"/>
     
-    <desc>You might not have the right codecs installed, or the DVD might be the wrong region.</desc>
+    <desc>You might not have the right codecs installed, or the DVD might be the
+ wrong region.</desc>
+
+    <revision pkgversion="3.2" date="2011-09-20" status="candidate"/>
     
     <credit type="author">
       <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
@@ -17,22 +20,40 @@
 
 <title>Why won't DVDs play?</title>
 
-<p>If you insert a DVD into your computer and it doesn't play, you may not have the right DVD "codecs" installed, or the DVD might be from a different "region".</p>
+  <p>If you insert a DVD into your computer and it doesn't play, you may not
+ have the right DVD <em>codecs</em> installed, or the DVD might be from a
+ different <em>region</em>.</p>
 
 <section id="codecs">
  <title>Installing the right codecs for DVD playback</title>
- <p>In order to play DVDs, you need to have the right <em>codecs</em> installed. A codec is a piece of software that allows applications to read a video or audio format. If you try to play a DVD and don't have the right codecs installed, the movie player you're using should tell you about this and offer to install them for you.
- If this doesn't happen, you'll have to install the codecs manually - ask for help on how to do this using your Linux distribution's support forums. The software packages you'll probably need are <app>gstreamer0.10-plugins-ugly</app> and <app>libdvd0</app>.</p>
- <p>DVDs are also "copy-protected" using a system called CSS. This prevents you from copying DVDs, but it also prevents you from playing them unless you have some extra software to handle the copy protection.</p>
+ <p>In order to play DVDs, you need to have the right <em>codecs</em> installed.
+ A codec is a piece of software that allows applications to read a video or
+ audio format. If your movie player software doesn't find the right codecs, it
+ may offer to install them for you. If not, you'll have to install the codecs
+ manually - ask for help on how to do this, for example on your Linux
+ distribution's support forums. You'll probably need to install the packages
+ <app>gstreamer0.10-plugins-ugly</app> and <app>libdvd0</app>.</p>
 
- <p>You can buy a commercial DVD decoder that can handle copy protection from <link href="http://www.fluendo.com/shop/product/fluendo-dvd-player/";>Fluendo</link>. It works with Linux and should be legal to use in all countries.</p>
+  <p>DVDs are also <em>copy-protected</em> using a system called CSS. This
+ prevents you from copying DVDs, but it also prevents you from playing them
+ unless you have extra software to handle the copy protection. You can buy a
+ commercial DVD decoder that can handle copy protection from
+ <link href="http://www.fluendo.com/shop/product/fluendo-dvd-player/";>Fluendo</link>.
+ It works with Linux and should be legal to use in all countries.</p>
 </section>
 
 <section id="region">
  <title>Checking the DVD region</title>
- <p>DVDs have a <em>region code</em>, which tells you in which region of the world you are allowed to play the DVD. DVD players can only play DVDs from the same region as them. For example, if you have a Region 1 DVD player, you will only be allowed to play DVDs from North America.</p>
- <p>If the region of your computer's DVD player and the DVD you are trying to play do not match, you won't be able to play the DVD. It is often possible to change the region used by your DVD player, but you can only do this a few times before it locks into one region permanently.</p>
- <p>To change the DVD region of your computer's DVD player, use <link href="http://linvdr.org/projects/regionset/";>regionset</link>.</p>
+  <p>DVDs have a <em>region code</em>, which tells you in which region of the
+ world they are allowed to be played. If the region of your computer's DVD
+ player doesn't match the region of the DVD you are trying to play, you won't be
+ able to play the DVD. For example, if you have a Region 1 DVD player, you will
+ only be allowed to play DVDs from North America.</p>
+
+  <p>It is often possible to change the region used by your DVD player, but it
+ can only be done a few times before it locks into one region permanently. To
+ change the DVD region of your computer's DVD player, use
+ <link href="http://linvdr.org/projects/regionset/";>regionset</link>.</p>
 </section>
 	
 </page>
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