[gnome-user-docs] removed duplicate wireless-noconnection pg. minor net- updates



commit 2c8261f92ce6d8778fd334f31f9dc32c79cc35ff
Author: Jim Campbell <jwcampbell gmail com>
Date:   Mon Mar 21 16:31:10 2011 -0400

    removed duplicate wireless-noconnection pg. minor net- updates

 gnome-help/C/net-cant-find-ip-address.page  |   10 ++--------
 gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page    |    8 +++++---
 gnome-help/C/net-wireless-noconnection.page |   24 ------------------------
 3 files changed, 7 insertions(+), 35 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-cant-find-ip-address.page b/gnome-help/C/net-cant-find-ip-address.page
index f01edf9..8dae9f5 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-cant-find-ip-address.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-cant-find-ip-address.page
@@ -11,16 +11,10 @@
       <years>2011</years>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>XXXXX</desc>
+    <desc>Resolve problems with connecting to the network.</desc>
   </info>
 
-  <title>My computer can't find an IP address</title>
-
-  <comment>
-    <cite date="2011-03-20" href="mailto:jwcampbell gmail com">Jim Campbell</cite>
-    <p>This assumes the reader knows how to.... By the end of this page,
-    the reader will be able to....</p>
-  </comment>
+  <title>My computer can't get an IP address</title>
 
   <p>Short introductory text...</p>
 
diff --git a/gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page b/gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page
index 42e7f53..6726bba 100644
--- a/gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page
+++ b/gnome-help/C/net-what-is-ip-address.page
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
       <years>2011</years>
     </credit>
 
-    <desc>An IP Address is like a home address for your computer.</desc>
+    <desc>An IP Address is like a phone number for your computer.</desc>
   </info>
 
   <title>What is an IP address?</title>
@@ -22,7 +22,9 @@
 
   <p>IP address stands for <em>Internet Protocol address</em>, and each device that is connected to a network (such as the Internet) has one.</p>
 
-  <p>An IP address is similar to your home address. Your home address is a unique set of numbers, words and characters identifies where you live, and helps mail to be sent to your home. An IP address is the unique set of numbers that identifies your computer so that it can send and receive data. Much like you need an address before you can receive mail, an IP address needs to be assigned to your computer before it can talk to other computers on the network.</p>
+  <p>An IP address is similar to your phone number. Your phone number is a unique set of numbers that identifies your phone so that other people can call you. Similarly, an IP address is a unique set of numbers that identifies your computer so that it can send and receive data with other computers.</p>
 
-  <p>An IP address can either be <em>dynamic</em> or <em>static</em>. Dynamic IP addresses are temporarily assigned each time your computer accesses the network. Static IP addresses are fixed, and do not change. Dynamic IP addresses are more common that static addresses. Static IP addresses are typically only used when there is a special need for them, such as administering a server.</p>
+  <p>Currently, most IP addresses consist of four sets of numbers, each separated by a period. <code>192.168.1.42</code> is an example of an IP address.</p>
+
+  <note style="tip"><p>An IP address can either be <em>dynamic</em> or <em>static</em>. Dynamic IP addresses are temporarily assigned each time your computer accesses the network. Static IP addresses are fixed, and do not change. Dynamic IP addresses are more common that static addresses--static IP addresses are typically only used when there is a special need for them, such as administering a server.</p></note>
 </page>



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