[empathy] [help] Fixed some typos
- From: Milo Casagrande <miloc src gnome org>
- To: commits-list gnome org
- Cc:
- Subject: [empathy] [help] Fixed some typos
- Date: Sun, 2 May 2010 16:21:21 +0000 (UTC)
commit 871a256b4eda943d1924bde6109f66197be060ca
Author: Harold Schreckengost <mewshi gmail com>
Date: Sun May 2 18:20:49 2010 +0200
[help] Fixed some typos
help/C/create-account.page | 2 +-
help/C/introduction.page | 17 +++++------------
2 files changed, 6 insertions(+), 13 deletions(-)
---
diff --git a/help/C/create-account.page b/help/C/create-account.page
index 404172a..4aa0171 100644
--- a/help/C/create-account.page
+++ b/help/C/create-account.page
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@
<p>This page provides information on creating a new account for various types of
accounts. Your account provider should give you a login ID and a password, as well
- as any additional information you need to connect with <app>Empathy</app>.</p>
+ as any additional information you need to connect using <app>Empathy</app>.</p>
<section id="facebook">
<title>Facebook</title>
diff --git a/help/C/introduction.page b/help/C/introduction.page
index 2d334f6..e7f96b8 100644
--- a/help/C/introduction.page
+++ b/help/C/introduction.page
@@ -15,21 +15,14 @@
</credit>
<license>
<p>Creative Commons Share Alike 3.0</p>
- </license>
-<!--
- <copyright>
- <year>2009</year>
- <name>GNOME Documentation Project</name>
- </copyright>
- <include href="legal.xml" xmlns="http://www.w3.org/2001/XInclude" />
--->
+ </license>
</info>
<title>Introduction</title>
<p>
<app>Empathy</app> is an instant messaging application for the GNOME Desktop.
- It supports text messaging, voice & video call, file transfers and all the
+ It supports text messaging, voice & video calls, file transfers, and all the
most used messaging systems such as MSN and Google Talk.
</p>
<p>
@@ -37,9 +30,9 @@
and that let you easily keep in touch with your friends.
</p>
<p>
- You can group all the conversations in a single window, have multiple windows for
- different kind of conversations, easily search through your previous conversations and
- share your desktop in just two clicks.
+ Using <app>Empathy</app>, you can group all the conversations in a single window,
+ have multiple windows for different kind of conversations, easily search through
+ your previous conversations, and share your desktop in just two clicks.
</p>
<figure>
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