Re: Article for Linux Pilot

[Emily Chen <emilychen522 gmail com>]

Hi Fred, 

It looks great. Just found some typos: 


	
	
	
	

...released the version 3 of its desktop environement. -> environment
...the service appartments housing them.-> apartments 

... with graphic adaptors not supporting 3D acceleration -> adapters  
... 260 univerity students -> university 
... One stricking example ->  striking 
...  organizers colaborated with local ->  collaborated 

... we are very enthusiatic to seeing so much involvment -> enthusiastic ,  Involvement  
to the sheir numbers of -> what does "sheir" means ? 

Thanks a lot for drafting the press release. 

-Emily 
	
	
	





	
	
	
	

the service appartments housing them.


	
	
	
	

environment

2011/5/24 Frederic Muller <fred beijinglug org>

Final version attached

On 05/23/2011 04:51 PM, Max wrote:

Thanks Fred
I am waiting your final version and translate to Chinese.
Linux Pilot also waiting us, they ask if we can give to them at May
Best regards
Max

2011/5/20 Frederic Muller <fred beijinglug org <mailto:fred beijinglug org>>

   On 05/19/2011 09:11 PM, Akhil Laddha wrote:

       On Thu, 2011-05-19 at 18:36 +0800, Frederic Muller wrote:

           Dear all,

           Please find attached the first draft for Linux Pilot (that
           Max will have
           to translate). Please feel free to read and comment.

           Depending on Linux pilot to chose only the Chinese version
           or not we
           might reuse it elsewhere or for another publication.

           Can someone (Pockey) help to chose 10 high resolution photos
           to match
           the article and provide to Linux Pilot too?

           I am going to write something similar but articulated
           differently for
           sponsors once I get all the comments.


       Overall article is great. Thanks Fred. Just wanted to point out
       minor
       things

       1) Shall we add information about giveaways like netbook and usb
       drives
       during conference ?

       2) Spelling or typo error
            (a) Alan day should be Allan day
            (b) OpenSUSE should be openSUSE

       3) My contribution mentioned is not right, i have closed most
       number of
       bugs in GNOME bugzilla in year 2009 and 2010 but i haven't fixed
       any.
       (a)
       http://mail.gnome.org/archives/gnome-bugsquad/2010-January/msg00000.html
       (b)
       http://mail.gnome.org/archives/gnome-bugsquad/2011-January/msg00000.html

       Or you can directly mention GNOME bug squad member.

       Regards,
       Akhil


   Thanks for the feedback. I'll fix that and try to add the giveaway
   stuff in as well.

   Fred
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