Re: Renewals (again)

[ghee teo <Ghee Teo Sun COM>]

Hi Vincent,

	I corrected some of the syntax and make it read a bit better here 
between the two lines of '------'

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Dear Vincent Untz,

It is time to renew your GNOME Foundation Membership which started (or
was last renewed) on 2002-09-18 and lasted two years.

When you first signed up, you had stated your contributions to GNOME
as follow:

GNOME Foundation Membership & Elections Committee, Bug Squad, GnomeICU

If you are still contributing to GNOME, please review the membership 
criteria at http://foundation.gnome.org/membership-policy.html and use 
the form at http://foundation.gnome.org/membership-form.php for renewal.
Please remember to check the box to indicate that you are an existing 
member.Once your renewal is accepted, your membership will be extended 
for two years.You shall receive a e-mail confiromation from the committee.

If you don't want to renew your membership, please consider supporting
us through the Friends of GNOME programme, details of which are 
available at http://www.gnome.org/friends/

Thanks for your suuport and interest,

The GNOME Foundation Memebership Committee

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        What does others thinks?

-Ghee


Vincent Untz wrote:
> Hi there
>
> I'm about to send mails to members who have their membership end before
> the elections (i.e. before December 15th).
>
> Here's a sample of the mail, please send your comments before Monday
> (some memberships end on Tuesday...). Is it correct english ?
>
> I may add something like : "please send your renewal application before
> the elections if you want to be assured to be able to vote". What do you
> think ?
>
> Oh, yeah : as there hasn't been any change in the by-laws, the renewed
> memberships will end in two years.
>
> (Note that the sample is for my membership, which do not end before next
> year, so don't pay attention to the date in the mail :-)).
>
> Ok, now here's the sample :
>
> =====
> Dear Vincent Untz,
>
> It is time to renew your GNOME Foundation Membership, which started (or
> was last renewed) on 2002-09-18 and lasted two years.
>
> When you originally signed up, you stated your contribution to GNOME
> was:
>
> GNOME Foundation Membership & Elections Committee, Bug Squad, GnomeICU
>
> If you are still contributing to GNOME, please review the criteria at
> http://foundation.gnome.org/membership-policy.html and consider using
> the form at http://foundation.gnome.org/membership-form.php to reapply.
> Please remember to check the box to indicate you are an existing member.
> If your renewal is accepted, your membership will be extended for two
> years.
>
> If you don't want to renew your membership, please consider supporting
> us through the Friends of GNOME program, details of which are available
> at http://www.gnome.org/friends/
>
> Thanks for your interest,
>
> The GNOME Foundation Memebership Committee
> =====
>
> Vincent


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Thanks,

Ghee Teo