Re: Annual report - ready to print (almost)

[Andreas Nilsson <lists andreasn se>]

Thanks, fixed.

On 07/20/2012 06:04 AM, Emily Gonyer wrote:
> Hey all, just a few things:
>
> Page 5 in  ..."binary that not only to benefits application
> developers" remove the 'to' after "..source code and binary
>
> Page 7,
> -third paragraph ".. While the philosophy to keep things simply
> remains," change "simply" to "simple"
> -fifth paragraph ..."to be official part of GNOME": add 'an' before
> 'official part of GNOME', also drop the -on- in ..."next release and
> -on- specific modules.
>
> Page 10,
> -Boston Summit, 2nd paragraph: .."Gtk+?/WebKit, Clutter 2.0, and
> Gestures among others." - I'm sure I meant to determine which vs of
> Gtk+ was worked, on, I'd assume 3 at this point, though I'm not 100%
> on that. (2010)
> - , add a comma after Evolution ..."Evolution Gstreamer, packaging
> GNOME in Debian and many others."
>
> Page 12,
> - change 'server' to 'served': "The conference server as warm up for
> the hackfest" and add "a" after "served as" so its "served as a warm
> up",
> - remo 'to' :  "GNOME documentation team to engage with other
> fellows." ..'team engage with other fellows'
>
> Under 'Accessibility hackfest agenda'
> - add "The" and change 'Plans' to plan before the first line: "The
> Plans for GNOME 3.."
>
> Page 15
> - need a space between 2011 and the: "In 2011the GNOME's outreach"
> - change "runs" to "ran": "runs through March 15, 2012"
>
> - remove ? before 'LinkedIn': "manager on ?LinkedIn"
>
> Page 18: can we move the link
> (http://openhatch.org/wiki/Open_Source_Workshop) down to the bottom?
> Or put a [1] in and then the link either after the question is fully
> answered or at the end of the interview (moving any/all others as
> well).
>
> Page 20: link: "mentoring howto:
> http://people.gnome.org/~federico/docs/summer­of­code­mentoring­howto/";
>
> Page 21: 2 links : .."available at http://youtu.be/jHB­N_rOZA* The 7th
> GNOME Forum" and end of 3rd paragraph
>
>
> Otherwise it looks great!! Thanks for all the hardwork!!
>
> Emily
>
> On Thu, Jul 19, 2012 at 10:30 PM, Diego Escalante Urrelo
> <diegoe gnome org> wrote:
> > Commenting is easy so here I go:
> >
> > - Isn't Karen's signature a bit "dirty"?
> >
> > - On the cover, isn't Annual Report a bit missaligned? Or is it just a
> > printing consideration? Also, the all caps looks a bit "Arialish"
> >
> > - Why not serif fonts for the main text too? Like in page 8 for
> > quotes, I believe this is usually easier to read on big text blocks.
> > (sorry, this is by far the naggiest comment)
> >
> > - On page 11/12 for Hackfests, the photo that is going to be cut in
> > the middle... Literally cuts down the girl in the middle. Any chance
> > to use another (the one with the laptops perhaps, since the middle is
> > empty, although it looks cool on the left already)?
> >
> > - On page 19, the interview with Daniel has some weird spacing, I mean
> > that there is a lot of blank before the title. I fail to see the
> > reason, I suppose it is some aligment reason.
> >
> > Now that you hate me, I will go on and say that it looks really cool
> > :-). Pages are well built, photos well used and the simplicity is
> > really GNOMEish.
> >
> > Thank you for all the work, you are my hero <3
> >
> > On Thu, Jul 19, 2012 at 8:56 PM, Andreas Nilsson <lists andreasn se> wrote:
> > > Hi!
> > > Designed and ready, now ready for proof reading before we print it.
> > > http://andreasn.myownb3.com/temp/annual-report.pdf
> > > - Andreas
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